prillalar: (dogbert)
prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2004-01-12 10:28 pm

Some things you can't forget. Even if you want to.

the rosy pucker of his untried entrance

Got one that's worse?

ext_31419: (spacemonkey)

[identity profile] ximeria.livejournal.com 2004-01-13 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
::laughs::
I think all of the above comments make it quite plain that some terms should be deleted in fics, put a way and never looked at again ... as another LJ friends said if you are ever tempted to use the word "intruder" in porn that isn't about breaking and entering? it's time to step away from the keyboard. Her comment about having read so much bad fic that she was almost using the same terms in her own *g*