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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2003-10-24 08:08 am

Hermione in love.

As-yet untitled snippet about the True Love of Hermione Granger. Written for [livejournal.com profile] sociofemme who supplied the opening paragraph. I confess I changed one word and deleted one more.

ETA: I've now had time to think of a title: Sweet Mystery of Love

Hermione Granger was in love. She realised it at ten minutes of two o’clock Tuesday afternoon, which may seem an odd time to have a realisation of that nature, but there you have it.

At a quarter of two, she was sitting in the Common Room reading her History of Magic notes about the Goblin Rebellion. At ten of two, just as she was reviewing an account of the dismemberment of the Special Diplomatic Envoy to the goblins, a thought flashed into her mind and wouldn't go away.

George Weasley, it said. You're in love with George Weasley.

Hermione knew it would be useless to keep revising at this juncture. But she felt it was most inconvenient. She hadn't planned to be in love at least until next year and preferably not until she'd left school altogether.

And George? Not on the short list of candidates. But the more she thought about it, the more reasonable it seemed. He really was bright, even though he focused his intelligence in unsuitable areas. But she could perhaps gently direct him. He was nice, he was fit. All in all, not unthinkable. In fact, it was becoming more and more thinkable the more she thought about it.

She looked around the common room. There he was, whispering in a corner with Fred. Hermione never had any trouble telling them apart. But this did make her wonder why George and not Fred. Perhaps it was a Mystery of Love; she was given to understand it was somewhat capricious.

As she watched them, George looked up and smiled at her. Hermione felt her heart quicken and her insides give a great leap. Really, the physiological effects of love were strange. But pleasant. She smiled back and wondered if she should go over and strike up a conversation.

Then Fred and George rose and Fred made an announcement. "Demonstrating the very latest from Weasley's Wizard Wheezes -- Skiving Snackboxes." Hermione watched, bemused by the pleased look on George's face. She really was impressed by the things they invented. She thought she'd tell George so, afterwards. She felt a warm, tingly sensation as she looked at him. It did seem to be love.

George took a bite out of a small striped chew and vomited copiously and noisily into a bucket.

Or possibly it was just a passing crush. Hermione gathered up her things and went to the library to study.

[identity profile] wickedcherub.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Hermione/George. Are you the only one that ships them? Because I had a flash the other day, of George standing on the ceiling with a bucket, with Hermione on the ground. Did you write that? I have no idea where it came from.

I love the way Hermione has everything planned. That once she'd figured it was love, and George, she went to the library to study. Away from George. Hee!

[identity profile] voleuse.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwww.

That is all.

I never forget that I love you.

[identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
For more than ten minutes at a time.

ah, the mysteries of love. (g)
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[identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee!

Perfect.
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[personal profile] semielliptical 2003-10-24 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha! I think the twins' vomiting demonstrations are hilarious, but it's true that this is not the kind of activity that potential partners are likely to find attractive.

Hermione's logical approach to being in love is just wonderful. I was thoroughly convinced that George was the guy for her until he started puking.
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[personal profile] semielliptical 2003-10-26 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
Personally, I think George *is* the guy for her

Oh, sure! Hermione will just have to learn that most relationships include accepting your partner's little flaws (or public vomiting demonstrations.)

[identity profile] sociofemme.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, I love you. That was absolutely perfect! How did you know I have a secret and illogical love for Hermione/Twin(s)? Oh, that's right, the way I flipped over your uber-hot summer Hermione/twins story! *g*

I love how fleeting her love was, too. She's like, oh, lalala, I'm in love. Ew, wait, you've just invented what? Um, going to the library now. kthxbai.

*still giggling*

you made my day! :-)
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[identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
bwahahaha!!! eee!!! it's 11:35 and i'm in love with this story!
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[identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
the tone was just perfect...hermione trying to rationalize and categorize her emotions :-)

Thanks for a great fic!

[identity profile] prairiedaun.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This was just lovely. Ahh, love. Or possibly a crush.

The way you wrote Hermione was wonderful. Good job.
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[identity profile] unanon.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*cackles* This is perfect...and makes sense considering Hermione's burgeoning hormones. *grin*

[identity profile] jood.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful. Wonderful, wonderful. Ah, adolescence's capricious whims, beautifully written.

Of course you are also the evil culprit behind that yummy Hermione/George&Fred summerboink thingy I've read far too many times to be considered strictly healthy, so I shouldn't be surprised.

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
omg. i felt this story was so on mark for those fleeting moments of love in school where some guy looks at you and smiles, you are thrown through a loop, and then realize he's smiling at his best buddy ahead of you. you end up shaking your head wondering what you ever saw in him for, like, two seconds. ahahaha, i love that.

and it's nice to see a twin paired up as i've always loved them in the canon. their personalities are magnetic, they're fit, they're hilarious. this is great!

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2003-10-27 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
dude, i totally agree. i was just talking about how much i loved them in OoTP - Rowling really outdid herself with her characterizations. They were my favorite part of that monstrosity called HP. I hope she's taking it to the next step (whatever that may be) for book 6. one can only hope. :)

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2003-10-27 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
i friended you - hope you don't mind. :)

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2003-10-28 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
hee. thanks. i do, too. it makes me smile. :)

[identity profile] laurakaye.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
This is amazingly grand, and perfectly true to them both, and I adore you with a mad passion for the wonderful things you do with these kids.

::Laura draws big hearts around Hal::

[identity profile] xsmoonshine.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeak* SQUEE! I love the style (and everything else, but for some reason I keep thinking Austen). =)

[identity profile] bethbethbeth.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect progression of thoughts. Perfect Hermione (although: "And George? Not on the short list of candidates." sounds a little more like *us* than like H.). And completely perfect timing where the penultimate line's concerned. *g*

[identity profile] bowdlerized.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, this was great! Um, titles--there's probably a good Shakespeare quote somewhere...maybe there's something in the play within Hamlet? Just a thought.

[identity profile] kitsune13.livejournal.com 2003-10-24 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha! That is adorable and funny, and I am SO GLAD that I am not the only one who loves Hermione/twins, and Hermione/George best of all. Even though part of me's going "Oooh, EXACTLY what I wanted!" and part of me's going "You're stealing my brain!" But this is lovely, and it would be lovely if you continued it, also! :D

[identity profile] catlove.livejournal.com 2004-07-13 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
Great ficlet. Loved the ending :D