omg. i felt this story was so on mark for those fleeting moments of love in school where some guy looks at you and smiles, you are thrown through a loop, and then realize he's smiling at his best buddy ahead of you. you end up shaking your head wondering what you ever saw in him for, like, two seconds. ahahaha, i love that.

and it's nice to see a twin paired up as i've always loved them in the canon. their personalities are magnetic, they're fit, they're hilarious. this is great!