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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2006-01-08 08:01 pm
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PoT Ficlet: Senpai-tachi (Tezuka, Ryoma, Fuji) + InuKai drabbles

Originally comment-fic for [livejournal.com profile] meitachi, posted here due to overwhelming demand cause [livejournal.com profile] darkeyedwolf asked, probably so she can blackmail me with it later. It's so short, it hardly deserves headers, but here they are anyhow. If I'd thought I was going to show this in public, I never would have used a Japanese title. *g*

ETA: I also dropped in some InuKai comment drabbles I did on an earlier post, just to pad things out a bit.


Senpai-tachi by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, Tezuka, Ryoma, Fuji, 160 words, G.
Mentoring.

"Watch your backhand."

Ryoma pulled his cap off his head, wiped the sweat from his forehead, and put it back on. "Yes, buchou," he said.

Tezuka nodded and moved into position to receive. Ryoma bounced the ball and Tezuka thought how much more passionate his game was now, how his eyes burned when they played.

When the set was over, they sat together, drinking water, not speaking. The sun was sinking behind the buildings and the air grew cooler.

"All done, Tezuka?"

Tezuka looked up at Fuji's smile. "Yes," he said and wondered what Fuji wanted with him.

"Get your things, Echizen," Fuji said.

Ryoma stood and shoved his racquet and towel into his bag.

"Fuji?"

"Tezuka, you remember how Yamato-buchou taught you that the most important thing is to love tennis?"

"Yes." Everything Tezuka did for Ryoma was to instill that same love in his heart.

Fuji put his arm around Ryoma. "Well, he taught me something else."





Pick-Up (InuKai)
Using a line from [livejournal.com profile] akatonbo

"Kaidoh," Inui said. "Can I ask you something?"

Kaidoh nodded.

"No, I got that wrong." Inui frowned. "Let me try again. Can I think about... No, that's not right either. Just wait a minute."

Kaidoh stood while Inui leafed through his notebook.

"I know I have it here somewhere," Inui said. "It's on the tip of my tongue."

"Ah, Inui," Fuji said. "It's 'Can I ask you to think about something?'" And he took Kaidoh's hand and led him away.




Untitled InuKai

"You have something of mine," Inui said and pushed his glasses up his nose.

Kaidoh opened his bag and looked through it. "I don't think so, senpai."

Inui leaned down and pressed his mouth to Kaidoh's, sliding his hand down Kaidoh's back and giving his bum a squeeze.

When Inui let go, Kaidoh's heart was racing and his face was hot. He stared at Inui and tried to yell at him, but no sound would come out of his mouth.

"You can have it back after practice," Inui said and left the club house.

Kaidoh played terribly.



Untitled InuKai

When Kaidoh told Inui he would do anything Inui wanted for his birthday, Kaidoh was still under the influence of five minutes of kissing and half a glass of Inui Juice.

When Kaidoh found out that what Inui wanted was for Kaidoh to dress up in a skirt, heels, and a red wig, he wasn't actually all that suprised.

When Kaidoh found out that Inui meant for him to go out in public like that, he wondered if it was too late to offer a backrub and a blowjob instead.

"Only if you still wear the wig and lipstick," Inui said.

They broke up a few weeks later.

[identity profile] darkeyedwolf.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm telling you, it's beautiful! It's ART.

It also deserves art. Preferably with a flashback/thoughtbubble to see Yamato imparting his knowledge onto Fuji.

[identity profile] jaebi-lit.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
What is it about PoT that lends itself to such humour? And, um, I couldn't resist.


Tezuka blinked. "What was that?" Yamato-buchou had loved tennis with an all-consuming passion, or so he had told Tezuka.

There is nothing that I love more than tennis, Yamato-buchou had said, gazing deeply into Tezuka's eyes, holding Tezuka's hands to demonstrate the proper grip. Tezuka had seen his reflection in Yamato-buchou's glasses, and the same passion for tennis had been visible in the reflection of his eyes.

"To love tennis balls and raquets." Fuji grinned. "The equipment is as important as the game, after all."

[identity profile] disutansu.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how you can portray Inui to be a dork and a perv and a hentai in three drabbles. XDDD The Many Sides of Inui! *snuggles you*

[identity profile] disutansu.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*suggests you write mini-drabbles with those Inuis as well* XD *bricked*

[identity profile] meiface.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
The InuKai hurt my head a little, I think. Especially the last one. Inui! ::scandalized:: (My icon = Kaidoh's reaction, poor boy. Or perhaps I just like this icon. You will never know!)

...I think I will reread the first one!

[identity profile] svz-insanity.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your Fuji. *snickers* First Ryoma-- then Kaidoh. Fuji's the town's bicycle(everyone gets a ride!).

Inui is dorky love. Him and his pick up lines.

My icon is probably how Inui felt after Fuji led Kaidoh away...

[identity profile] hecatehatesthat.livejournal.com 2006-01-09 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
OMG POOR LOST INUI. Maybe he and Momo should team up to rescue Kaidoh from Fuji's evil clutches. There could be hats.

[identity profile] bookshop.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
EVIL! EVIL! BRAZEN AND EVIL!

...

I am trying to pretend I don't see Wolfie's influence all over the first one. And also trying to pretend that the immediate few seconds after don't involve Tezuka and Fuji getting into a tug-of-war.

IT'S OKAY, RYOMA. BUCHOU WILL GET YOU BACK.

Argh, and the evility doesn't stop! FUJI/KAIDOH. HAHAHA. The confusion rampant in this drabble is perfect; I think it's my favorite of the bunch. (Because, you know, I feel totally unthreatened by Fuji stealing Kaidoh. Sigh. Why am I so easy.)

As always, these are fabulous, Hal. :D

[identity profile] histoirede.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this omake is even better than the fics X3
*thumbs up*

[identity profile] hecatehatesthat.livejournal.com 2006-01-09 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
GO FUJI. He gets all the action tonight!

These are hilarious and I love you.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-01-09 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*snerk* your Inui is my hero. And I absolutely love the disparity between Fuji and Tezuka's training regimens. Surely Echizen will be very well-rounded (and no that is not an invitation to write mpreg, although if anybody's tennis could get somebody pregnant it would be Fuji's).

Also, i love that Kaidoh is not suprised about the wig and heels. He's probably relieved after thinking how much worse it could be.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 09:13 am (UTC)(link)
I think *you* are the one who should write this.

"Here I go," Fuji said, bringing his racket down. There was a THWACK of contact with the ball, a strange whooshing, Fuji's hair waved hypnotically, and then...nothing.

"eh?" Echizen looked around behind him. "Where'd it go?"

"You'll see," Fuji smirked.

Seven months later...

"He can't be singles 3 for the tournament," Oishi folded his arms, "he's showing."

Tezuka looked over his shoulder at where Echizen was sitting on the bench, trying valiantly to defend his stomach bump from Fuji and Inui with an mp3 player.

"Saa, Ryoma," Fuji was trying to hold up the earbuds to the bump, "music makes babies smarter."

"I crafted this mix myself," Inui reported.

Tezuka looked back at Oishi.

"I'll order a bigger Regular's jacket," he sighed.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Inui would totally be down with this entire experiment. He'd be crafting pregancy vitamins and such. And Kaidoh would move to France in self-defence.

I can see the hearts all the sudden! Firefox must've updated! hurray!

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Do you think Ryoma would let Fuji and Inui adopt the baby?
I'm...unsure. I'm picturing fuji with a cat-eyed infant cradled against his chest in a snuggly.

why is that everything that should make Fuji look sort of stupid just in fact make him even MORE creepy?

Moreover, [livejournal.com profile] marksykins and I were talking about Fuji impregnating everybody on the team (except for Kaidoh who was pounced on too quickly and ends up fathering twins to Momo and Inui), and decided that it would be like FUJI OF THE CORN which is utterly terrifying. As is the fact that the plural of Fuji is Fuji.

ah, i got excited about the hearts there for a moment. damn.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 01:01 pm (UTC)(link)
you know Ryoma would let Kirihara babysit, and everybody else would be all "Are you CRAZY?! do you know what he'll DO to that kid?!" and when Ryoma finally picks him up at the end, the kid is unharmed and Kirihara is smug, and Ryoma says "hn, i thought for sure you'd kill him."

[identity profile] darkeyedwolf.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHA FUJIRYO ♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com 2010-06-01 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
asdghk I adore these~! Absolutely love that pick-up line wherein Fuji intervened and *squee* mention of Yamato-buchou!time. <3 The ending drabble though was... yeah, Inui deserved it.