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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2007-11-25 06:30 pm
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PoT Fic: Sport (InuKai)

The snippet I wrote for [livejournal.com profile] disutansu's InuKai day post.

Sport by Halrloprillalar / [livejournal.com profile] prillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuKai, G, 435 words.



"Did you ever think about playing another sport?" Inui put the cap on his pen.

Kaidoh looked up from his homework. He didn't say anything, just frowned a little.

"I didn't think so." Inui couldn't really imagine Kaidoh as anything but a tennis player. Or, to be accurate, he couldn't imagine Kaidoh as a player of any other sport. To be strictly accurate, Inui often imagined Kaidoh doing a number of things other than tennis, just not other sports.

In fact, as recently as four o'clock, Inui had imagined Kaidoh coming into the room and pinning Inui against the wall, raking his hands down Inui's chest, and declaring, "I want you now," in a low and sultry voice, then kissing him with wild abandon.

At four oh five, Kaidoh had indeed come into the room, but he'd just nodded to Inui, and sat down with his books. He did squeeze Inui's fingers when Inui took his hand but there wasn't much in the way of wild abandon.

But there was always hope. Inui started to imagine him and and Kaidoh at the Australian Open. They would win Men's Doubles and when they were being interviewed by the TV crews, Kaidoh would look at Inui with a passionate gaze and say, "I owe it all to Inui-senpai. I want everyone to know that we--"

"Soccer, maybe."

"What?" Australia vanished in a puff of passionate smoke.

"I like soccer," Kaidoh said.

Inui imagined Kaidoh transferring out of tennis into the soccer club. He imagined him playing in a J.League club -- maybe FC Tokyo, they had blue uniforms, right? -- and leading them to the league championship. Then the national team and winning the World Cup. Endorsement deals and a talk show. While Inui watched it all on TV alone at home.

"If you really want to leave the tennis club," Inui said and imagined finding someone else to train with and play doubles with and hang out with, someone with a properly sultry voice and passionate eyes and an actual appreciation of all Inui would do for him. Only he couldn't imagine that. Inui dropped his pen on the floor.

Kaidoh looked over at Inui. "Senpai, I love tennis." He scooted along the floor until he was next to Inui. "I don't want to leave the tennis club."

"You don't want to drop tennis for soccer?" Inui went limp with relief.

"If I did, would you coach me?" Kaidoh said and maybe gruff was better than sultry. Kaidoh leaned against Inui's shoulder and turned his head and Inui didn't even have time to imagine the kiss.

[identity profile] reddwarfer.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
I ♥ you so very much right now.

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
aw. Inui. You idiot boy.
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[personal profile] padfoot 2007-11-26 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
Kaidoh leaned against Inui's shoulder and turned his head and Inui didn't even have time to imagine the kiss. -- That line is breathtaking. God, gorgeous.

[identity profile] candy-marie-55.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
whoo-hoo-hoo, loving almost-psycho-with-love!Inui, and the ending is ♥
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[personal profile] annotated_em 2007-11-26 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, Inui, you sweet dork you. *lurves him*
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[personal profile] qem_chibati 2007-11-26 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
*coos and Inui and Kaidoh*

[identity profile] jaebi-lit.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
I love Inui's powers of imagination. They're so vivid and the littlest things send him off on a flight of fancy.

mad genius for the win!

[identity profile] jaebi-lit.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
Rereading this, Inui sounds like a psycho stalker. Which, to be fair, is more or less what he is in canon, with a side of mad scientist thrown in. Oddly, he remains attractive nonetheless.

[identity profile] eternalsayonara.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
-sniffle- Oh, Inui. I think Kaidoh is good for you.

[identity profile] geeksicle.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, man, that's so great <3

[identity profile] weinende-rot.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
ah, so sweat <3

[identity profile] weinende-rot.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 07:04 am (UTC)(link)
damn. sweet I mean =D. Work is bad for my brain XD XD

[identity profile] weinende-rot.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Lolz. You're right =D

[identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, sweet!

[identity profile] histoirede.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
The J-League is already full of Captain Tsubasa players, Kaidô had better to stick with tennis ^___-
Lovely fic !

[identity profile] don-amoeba.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 08:32 am (UTC)(link)
This is too good. *melts* :DDDD

[identity profile] alice-and-lain.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, Inui. Don't go borrowing trouble.

[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I watched The Green Towel of Love episode this weekend and was distracted, briefly, from Renji's level of hot by how pretty Kaidoh really was. :D

♥ This was beautiful - I was thrilled to see it.

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
a;klfje;fef. This is so adorable. I love daydreaming Inui. And god, who can blame him for imagining Kaidoh raking his hands down his chest like that?

Also, the mental image of Kaidoh in a soccer uniform is like. A+++.

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2007-11-27 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
I'm sure you're right. And even despite the fact that he doesn't want Kaidoh to leave tennis, I bet he wouldn't object to seeing him in those knee socks, either.

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2007-11-27 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my god . . . I've never noticed just how rainbow the background of that shot really is.

I love this show. :)

[identity profile] babydracky.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
That's so cute!!!
This is SO Inui to think like that! XD
I love it!

[identity profile] karorumetallium.livejournal.com 2007-11-27 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
ILU *___________________________*

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeee. Yes, they still make my heart all fluttery so very very much. ♥♥♥

[identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com 2010-06-01 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
<3 RABU~!
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