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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2007-04-05 04:46 pm
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PoT Fic: Obsession for Men, Oishi/Eiji

I love you, Lil. ♥ This isn't much, but I hope it helps.

Obsession for Men by Halrloprillalar / [livejournal.com profile] prillalar
Prince of Tennis, Oishi/Eiji, 1300 words, PG.
Soup.


By the time Eiji got there, Oishi was almost weak with anticipation. "You're late," he said and his voice nearly cracked.

"I was shopping." Eiji pushed past Oishi into the house. His hair brushed against Oishi's face and tickled his nose.

"I don't have much free time today." Oishi reached to hug Eiji. Eiji handed him a heavy plastic bag.

"I wasn't sure what to get, so I picked up a bunch of different things."

"It's too bad, but I have a lot of extra work to do. A lot of homework and next week's practice schedules." Bowling league at seven. When he'd rather be watching TV with Eiji sprawled on top of him. Or, better, doing other things.

"Since Tezuka went and got himself sick." Eiji frowned, his lower lip pushing almost into a pout. Oishi wanted to bite it, to suck it into his mouth.

"Yes, exactly. But we do have the house to ourselves for the afternoon." Heat rushed into his face, it still made him embarrassed. "So we can--"

"We're making soup!"

For three seconds, Oishi wondered if "making soup" was maybe a colourful euphemism for what he'd been thinking about all weekend. Then Eiji took an apron out of his backpack.

"So he'll get well." Eiji pulled the apron over Oishi's head. "When Tezuka is sick," he said, "you have to do twice as much work. And then you're too busy to hang out with me." He slid his arms around Oishi's waist and tied the apron behind him. Oishi leaned closer, reaching with his free hand, but Eiji sprang back before he could hold on.

"It's nice of you to think of Tezuka," Oishi said. "Did I mention my parents are out all afternoon?"

"It's vegetable soup," Eiji said and went into the kitchen.

Oishi looked down at the apron. There was a duck on it.

When Oishi got into the kitchen, Eiji was on his toes, stretching up to pull a pot off the top of the shelves. Oishi knew where there was a step-stool, but instead of being a nice boy and getting it, he just stared at Eiji's shoulders, at the flash of skin where his shirt pulled away from his jeans, at his ass. Because Oishi was unhealthily obsessed.

He'd tried not to be, but it turned out that you actually can't stop being unhealthily obsessed just by trying. Or by meditation and healthy occupations. Or cold water and self-manipulation.

Then just when he was on the verge of apologizing to Tezuka and transferring to another school, Eiji tackled him in his own bedroom and ever since, Oishi had been wandering around in a pink-coloured haze of obsessed happiness that he only felt slightly guilty about.

"You chop the carrots." Eiji took the bag from Oishi and tossed vegetables at him. "And the radish. Broccoli. Squash." Oishi missed the squash and it thumped to the floor. The feathery tops of the carrots tickled Oishi's nose. It wasn't as nice as Eiji's hair.

Oishi piled the vegetables on the counter. "How much should I chop?"

"Whatever looks good." Eiji opened one drawer, then another. "Do you have a grater?"

"What does the recipe say?"

"Real cooks don't use recipes."

"But what if it doesn't turn out?" They couldn't show up at Tezuka's with sub-standard soup. What would he think? "It might make him sicker."

"My cooking always turns out." Eiji frowned and Oishi felt a ripple of unease in the pit of his stomach. Then Eiji laughed. "Don't worry!" He poked Oishi in the duck.

So Oishi chopped while Eiji darted around behind him, humming and grating and pouring. He did seem to know what he was doing. Eiji always seemed to know what he was doing. Even when they were doing...that...Eiji had an uncanny ability to do the exact things to Oishi that turned him into a shivering melting unhealthily obsessed pink-cloud wreck of god more yes now please. Oishi always worried that he didn't measure up, that Eiji was just being kind.

"The carrots look yummy." Eiji grabbed a piece and crunched it enthusiastically. "Here." He picked up another and held it up to Oishi's mouth. Oishi opened and Eiji pushed it past Oishi's lips. His fingers brushed Oishi's tongue and Oishi had to lean against the counter to keep his knees from buckling.

Eiji went back to his soup pot and Oishi sneaked glances at him: his hair falling over his cheek, a scrape on his arm from Friday's practice, his waist twisting as he reached for-- "What's that?"

"Inui juice." Eiji unscrewed the top of the bottle. "What does it look like?"

"Eiji, that's sake."

"Don't worry, the alcohol cooks off. Tezuka won't get tipsy." He took a quick swig. "Want a taste?"

"But we're underage!" They could get drunk and caught and expelled and the whole team disqualified from tennis.

"Come on." Eiji held the bottle out, doing that thing with his eyes where they were huge and almost sad, which is what probably caused the whole unhealthy obsession in the first place. Oishi took the bottle and tipped it up.

It nearly choked him. He coughed and sputtered as the sake burned its way down his throat and half into his trachea. Eiji rescued the bottle and banged him on the back. "Isn't it gross?" He poured the rest into the pot. Oishi heaved in breath and blinked back the water in his eyes. How lame. How uncool.

That was probably it. Eiji thought Oishi was stupid. He was tired of him, tired of Oishi's lameness and lousy kissing. The soup was just an excuse to get out of being with him. Oishi blinked again. It was still hard to breathe. The whole room smelled like booze. Oishi opened a window.

"Okay," Eiji said. "The soup has to come to a boil, then simmer until it's done."

Oishi rinsed off the cutting board. He let the water run over his hands, closing his eyes. There was a lump of ice behind his chest, making him slow and sad and stupid. Everything sucked. The afternoon sucked. The piles of work to do sucked. Bowling was going to suck. And lame obsessed Oishi sucked most of all.

He should just tell Eiji something, that it was okay, he didn't have to be here, wasting his time. He clenched his hands and took a deep breath. "Eiji," he said.

Eiji slid up behind him and wrapped his arms around Oishi's chest, rubbing his nose behind Oishi's ear. "It's fun to make you wait," he said.

The ice melted in a flash of heat and Oishi almost laughed. "Eiji," he said again, too relieved to even be annoyed. Eiji squirmed closer and kissed Oishi's throat and then Oishi was too turned on to be much of anything but unhealthily obsessed.

"Did you say your parents were out?" Eiji said and grabbed Oishi's ass.

Everything went pink.

+

"I forgot to turn down the heat." Eiji poked at the scorched mess. "It's all your fault."

"My fault?" Oishi wondered how long it would take to scour the pot. But at least the air didn't smell like sake anymore.

"You distracted me." Eiji grinned. "You looked so cute in that apron."

"Eiji!" Oishi could feel the colour rising in his face. He smiled back. "Poor Tezuka, though."

Eiji shrugged. "He'll be fine." He grabbed Oishi's hand. "Let's watch TV."

"But what about the kitchen?" Besides the pot, there were knives and measuring cups left out, bits of vegetables and spills of spices on the countertop.

"We'll do it later." Eiji pulled Oishi into the other room and they tumbled down in front of the television, Eiji lying across Oishi's lap. Oishi couldn't make himself feel even a little bit guilty.

+

Oishi didn't get his homework done. He had to copy last week's practice schedules. He got in trouble with his parents for the mess.

But he bowled a perfect game.

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2007-04-05 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this. :D Especially when Eiji pokes Oishi in the duck. *coughs*
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[personal profile] flonnebonne 2007-04-06 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
I am so glad I was not the only one thinking unclean thoughts.

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[identity profile] altricial.livejournal.com 2007-04-05 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
"Then just when he was on the verge of apologizing to Tezuka and transferring to another school,"

dead. oh oishi. I love your writing as always Image

[identity profile] maeran.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
"My cooking always turns out." Eiji frowned and Oishi felt a ripple of unease in the pit of his stomach. Then Eiji laughed. "Don't worry!" He poked Oishi in the duck.


I LOVE YOUR EIJI. XD Did I mention I LOVE YOUR EIJI?

♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] maeran.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Why is it even BETTER the second-time around? XD You = SO MUCH LOVE.

[identity profile] kat8cha.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
It's vegetable soup

Yes. Vegetable soup.

<33333 Awesome and lovely and sweet and Oh Eiji and I want to squish your Oishi.

[identity profile] achariya.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
I am making little starry eyes at you. Push him over the counter, Eiji! Plenty of vegetable oil riiiight over there!

(Sex is always better interpolated.)
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[personal profile] annotated_em 2007-04-06 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
*giggling helplessly* Oh. Oh, Oishi. *dotes on him*

[identity profile] alieu.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
They couldn't show up at Tezuka's with sub-standard soup. What would he think?

Oh. Oh, Oishi. I die. XD;;; *laughing so hard there's tears*

Your Oishi is an utterly adorable, hopelessly lovestruck puppy, and I want to pick him up and hug him forever. X3 ♥ Really, I think your Eiji is smashing, too, but your Oishi is what lured me in and kept me reading. Hook, line, and sinker. This is definitely going into my memories. *_*;;

Thank you so much for sharing this with us! I love your writing style ♥

[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, god. :D That was the most precious thing to grace my flist in days. Well, this and those pictures of Seto that Lil posted earlier.



You did it, Hal! Now we can all be happy.

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[identity profile] serenia.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha! Oh, I love your obsessed Oishi. "Did I mention my parents are out all afternoon?"

[identity profile] bobbissimo.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Eiji slid up behind him and wrapped his arms around Oishi's chest, rubbing his nose behind Oishi's ear. "It's fun to make you wait," he said.

Your Eiji is so evil. I just adore him that way. ♥

[identity profile] meritjubet.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Nice to know that Oishi can be a normal, hormone and Eiji obsessed teenager :) loved how Eiji was a tease. The apron *grins* cute!

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Because Oishi was unhealthily obsessed.

Hm. Reminds me of a certain fandomder who shall remain nameless.

:D
:D
:D

(*runs* Love you all!!)

Dead on though. specially with the duck poking.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! Haru-senpai's Golden pair! ♥

You do Oishi so well, he's all worked up and wibbly and just wants to be loved. And also about as transparent as a two-cent sheet of plastic wrap.

Poked him in the duck! *dies and dies* ilu.

[identity profile] waxrose.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww. ♥ I just love how you write Oishi. I want to hug him so much.

[identity profile] ellipsesbandit.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
This is lovely. Your Oishi is spot-on perfect and definitely unhealthily obsessed. I was so sad there wasn't a vegetable soup scene in the OVA, but this makes me feel much better.

[identity profile] sarahofcroydon.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWW~!!!! HAL I LOVE YOU TOO.
I love how obsessed and bumbly and worried Oishi is
Eiji's arse is so nice. And Oishi's so sweet. And lovely. Like you. Except he doesn't have a basement. This so made up for anything that should have been in the OVA.


[identity profile] sarahofcroydon.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
I just read it again. YOU SHOULD WRITE THEM FOREVER. <3

[identity profile] reposoir.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 08:35 am (UTC)(link)
"It's nice of you to think of Tezuka," Oishi said. "Did I mention my parents are out all afternoon?"

Oh, god. Oishi's worrying was just...so...priceless. I found myself toddlerfisting every time he worried about something new.

And then the last line, just, perfect. I'm still grinning at it. :D :D :D
jain: Tennis ball in the air. (prince of tennis)

[personal profile] jain 2007-04-06 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
His fingers brushed Oishi's tongue and Oishi had to lean against the counter to keep his knees from buckling.

Whoo, that's hot. *fans self*

Eiji is just generally charming and funny and adorable here, and Oishi's insecurity made me wibble a lot. Very sweet story!

[identity profile] minkyleigh.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 11:57 am (UTC)(link)
I love this so much! Worried, unhealthily obsessed Oishi and boyish, pouncing Eiji - absolutely fantastic.

And it's been said before, but

He poked Oishi in the duck.

nearly knocked me out of my chair with laughter. That may just be one of the best lines ever.

[identity profile] hibimaosuki.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY.

I will never look at pink the same way again. XDDD

[identity profile] solanum-d.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I am very sick and very dilerious, right now. However, this fic made me so happy and gleeful. I wish I was Tezuka and that they were making me soup. The characterizations were just smashing - hilarious, adorable, and spot-on. The quips and dialogue had me giggling madly (following immediately by coughing madly, but I digress). It was just a pleasure to read from beginning to end. We all needed the soup, I think. Thanks so much for writing this. It is better than my antibiotics. I am memorying it first and then rereading it repeatedly. ^___________^ You are brilliant.

[identity profile] scribblefish.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll be another person to tell you how much I adore your Oishi :D
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[identity profile] analineblue.livejournal.com 2007-04-06 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* I loved this! A perfect vegetable soup fic, just like I was hoping for. ♥

a shivering melting unhealthily obsessed pink-cloud wreck of god more yes now please - I especially love that line. XD XD The idea of things turning pink for Oishi is just brilliant. :D

Anyway, thank you so much for writing this, it completely made my afternoon. \^o^/

[identity profile] rensahannou.livejournal.com 2007-04-07 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
My goodness, I love your Golden Pair. Also, I grinned like a moron when I saw you had joined the GP comm. :D

I can't even pick a favorite anything from this. Everything is wonderful. ♥♥♥

And it made me think of my own unhealthy obsession, which, um, just kind of made it even better.

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