prillalar: (tezuka/oishi)
prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2007-03-29 06:26 pm
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PoT FIC: Lock Up, Oishi/Tezuka

My mostly non-emo contribution to the Oishi/Tezuka mini smut fest. (Okay, it's kind of emo. But nothing like the one I started and then didn't finish because it was too emo. I'll post that one another day.)

Lock Up by Halrloprillalar / [livejournal.com profile] prillalar
Prince of Tennis, Oishi/Tezuka, R, 500 words.
The usual clubhouse sex.



"Everyone was worried for a while there." Oishi picked up a towel from the floor. "They thought Inui might actually win."

"Were you?" Tezuka asked and Oishi watched his fingers on the buttons of his shirt, the skin disappearing behind the fabric.

"Tezuka," Oishi said. "When you're that serious..." Everyone on the sidelines bending forward, fingers twisting through the wire of the fence, eyes on Tezuka. "Were you?"

Shadow covered Tezuka's face and Oishi couldn't quite read his expression. So he moved closer, leaving half a step between them. Tezuka shifted slightly, resettling his weight so he was leaning back, away. Oishi stood and looked at him.

From this distance, he could see Tezuka's eyes behind his glasses, his pupils large in the dim of the room. Oishi could see Tezuka's jaw tighten, his forehead crease.

"No," Tezuka said.

Oishi watched him for a few seconds longer. "Okay," he said and turned away. Tezuka followed him to the door, his bag over his shoulder. Oishi stopped with his hand on the doorknob. He could hear Tezuka breathing behind him. He closed his eyes. Then he turned the lock.

"Oishi." Tezuka frowned and crossed his arms over his chest. But Oishi pushed in close, too close to see much at all, and shivered as a tickle ran down his spine.

"Yes," Oishi said and kissed Tezuka's closed mouth. Tezuka didn't respond and Oishi kissed him again, fingers twisting in the sleeve of Tezuka's shirt. He leaned his cheek against Tezuka's. "Yes," he said into Tezuka's skin and kissed him again, a slow damp swipe along the jaw and Tezuka's lower lip.

Tezuka's bag dropped to the floor. His breath blew out, half into Oishi's mouth. And he got serious.

They staggered over the floor together, kissing and clutching until Oishi's mouth was watering and Tezuka's shirt was hiked half up his chest and Oishi's back was up against the cubbies. Tezuka slid to his knees.

"You don't have to," Oishi said, because that was what he always said, and Tezuka pressed his face to the front of Oishi's pants and rubbed his cheek over Oishi's dick.

Oishi put his hand over his eyes and let Tezuka suck him off. He couldn't watch, he could never look at Tezuka's face. Then he didn't have to know if Tezuka liked Oishi or if he just liked cock.

"I'm going to--" Oishi said, and choked, and came, hips jerking, face twisting. When he opened his eyes, Tezuka was spitting into his handkerchief. Oishi grabbed his shoulder and buried his face in Tezuka's neck.

Tezuka stood still until Oishi pulled back. Then he picked up his bag again. Oishi didn't stop him. Sometimes he did, sometimes he held on and rubbed Tezuka through his pants until he gasped into Oishi's shoulder. But Tezuka seemed happier when he didn't.

"I'll lock up," Oishi said. Tezuka nodded and left. Oishi stood by the door and watched Tezuka walk away. Then he went home to worry.

-fin-

Comments of any kind are always welcome. :)

[identity profile] achariya.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
I'LL LOCK UP -- ! ♥

I'm sure you will, Oishi-san.

This was fabulous. I've never explored dad/mom, but oh, it's so lovely. Hide your eyes from the brightness that is Tezuka-seme, Oishi...

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ext_30466: (stalemate.)

[identity profile] storyteller.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((


and yet so hot. GUH, hal, guuuuuh. :D~

[identity profile] trinityhelix.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
>>Then he went home to worry.

God, Hal. *shivers*

It's been such a crazy week and yet I come home to read this. Fucking brilliant.

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:12 am (UTC)(link)
Last line. Brilliant.

we love you, Hal.

[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
We should do this at least once a quarter.

I can't decide what I liked better - the cocksucking or Oishi clinging after. Damn that was fine.

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, I love that last line. :D My poor angsty babies.

[identity profile] waxrose.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
*________*

Oh, Oishi.

[identity profile] maeran.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
*is so dead*

*in a good way, but still!* XD ♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] serenia.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
What do you mean, not emo? I reckon that was rather angsty.
Although I guess those two aren't all happyshiny like the Golden Pair, or even Eiji and Fuji.

I still like whatever I can get of Oishi/Tezuka. Especially with Oishi as top!

[identity profile] polyurethane.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 07:12 am (UTC)(link)


WIN.

SO MUCH WIN.

YAY.

[identity profile] don-amoeba.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
Then he didn't have to know if Tezuka liked Oishi or if he just liked cock.

*dies*

Tezuka/Oishi makes me sad, but I'm more infatuate by Tezuka/cock here.

[identity profile] katsu.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
You are a GENIUS!!!
jain: (tezuka)

[personal profile] jain 2007-03-30 07:44 am (UTC)(link)
This was so sad! Wonderful, as well, and really scarily plausible, but...my poor baby boys! The line Then he didn't have to know if Tezuka liked Oishi or if he just liked cock. made me start wibbling, and by the time you got to Tezuka seeming happier when Oishi didn't touch him, I was pretty much heartbroken. Great job with the story; I'm just going to go have a good cry, now.

[identity profile] reposoir.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
And he got serious

But did he get careless as well?

Oh god, Hal! That was good, damn good as always from your writing. But I think the last line was the most priceless. Oh, Oishi and his worrying. *toddlerfists*

[identity profile] hamburgerjack.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
*throws money at your feet*

hosha!

:D

Thank you!

This must be a conspiracy to secretly make me like Tezuka because of Oishi! :3

It's working. Fufufufu...*slithers off*

[identity profile] scoradh.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 11:29 am (UTC)(link)
That was redefined emo. Tezuka the emotionless slutty automaton? Oh yeah. I'd give my right arm to be able to do what you do.

[identity profile] jazzyjello.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, ouch. Just. Perfect and hot but it hurt. Poor Oishi. ♥

[identity profile] moshesque.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Then he turned the lock.

Go Oishi!

This is awesome. *_*

[identity profile] meritjubet.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw... very emotive. I liked how you set for the stage for the blowjob and the the last line really fitted perfectly.

[identity profile] meretricula.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
~hugs Oishi~ wow, that was so IC! Tezuka needs to unrepress a little and let Oishi take care of him. XD

[identity profile] karorumetallium.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
SJADBKAJSHKJHKASJHFJSH. Not my fave pairing, but you've made my day. ILU.
alestar: (seigaku)

[personal profile] alestar 2007-03-30 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I suck at feedback since everything I feel about what I love is so indistinct, but wow, everything you write makes me so happy. I want to be just like you when I grow up. Except I'm still not going to watch Heroes.

This is the only Oishi/Tezuka I've read, though I think I could love it-- could you tell me where I might find the rest of this mini smut fest?

[identity profile] solanum-d.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
The writing is really quite excellent. At the beginning, I felt like I had to be a fan of the pairing to get into it... but then... with Oishi, it became so real and poignant and that's when I really felt it. So, yes, at the end, I liked it. *nods*

...but because I'm sick and in a mood, I'm going to use this icon. ^_^

[identity profile] shinichirouwaya.livejournal.com 2007-03-30 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, I've missed your drabbles/fics <3. Lovely as always and it makes me want to get back into the PoT fandom more XD.

[identity profile] nivell.livejournal.com 2007-03-31 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
Then he didn't have to know if Tezuka liked Oishi or if he just liked cock.

DUH! Tezzy lurves the cock! In all seriousness though, best line ever.

Mnn...Tezuke and cock.

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