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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2006-10-13 11:45 am

PoT Fic: Perspective, MomoKai PWP

The usual migraine-induced thing.

Perspective by Halrloprillalar / [livejournal.com profile] prillalar
Prince of Tennis, MomoKai, R, 600 words.
PWP.


Momo grabs Kaidoh's ankle and yanks but the angle is wrong and Momo can't get any leverage, flat on his back on the floor. "Fucker," Kaidoh says, and Momo cranes his head back and looks at Kaidoh, up his thighs and chest and right on up his nose. Momo laughs and pulls again, both hands this time, and Kaidoh is obliging enough to fall over and asshole enough to nearly squash Momo when he does.

"Don't be so noisy," Kaidoh says, like he wasn't the one whose elbows thumped against the floor, and when Momo opens his mouth to retort, Kaidoh stops it with his tongue, which is more or less what Momo wanted in the first place, so he lets it go.

Momo edges himself out from under and pushes a knee between Kaidoh's thighs. He can feel the tremor roll through Kaidoh's body and into his own, then back and forth again, like some kind of wave amplification that Momo might know something about if he paid attention in science class. He licks the underside of Kaidoh's tongue and Kaidoh squirms closer; he has this whole thing about tongues. Momo doesn't, not especially, but he has a thing about dry humping and hand jobs so it all works out in the end.

He can't help making a sound in the back of his throat when he gets his dick up hard against Kaidoh's leg. Kaidoh tightens his fingers on Momo's shoulder and sucks on Momo's tongue. Then he moves too and they're jammed up close, rubbing their cocks together and pressing their faces into each other's necks. Momo sends a mental command to Kaidoh to pull back and give Momo some head, but that never works and Momo can't figure out any way to actually ask for it. And he's not going to go first.

Kaidoh's breath puffs down the collar of Momo's shirt and the hairs on the back of Momo's neck stand up. He runs his tongue around the folds of Kaidoh's ear and now Kaidoh is the one who can't keep quiet. When Momo sticks his tongue down inside the ear canal, Kaidoh hisses and jerks his hips. At least he didn't bite me this time, Momo thinks, and then the wave gets over-amplified and he comes and comes, all his muscles pulling tight and his breath trapped inside him and the air swimming in front of his eyes.

When he's empty, he sags, letting go and falling back onto the floor. "Bastard," Kaidoh says, and rocks up into Momo's thigh a few more times before he digs his fingernails into Momo's arm and shakes like he's seen a ghost.

Now Momo is warm and drowsy, with a sticky mess in his pants and the bitter taste of Kaidoh's earwax in his mouth. Kaidoh is half on top of him and Momo curls into him like he's a quilt on a January morning, ten minutes after Momo has to get up for school. He's half-asleep when Kaidoh pulls away. "No," Momo says and reaches out for him. "Don't leave."

And Kaidoh stops and Momo stops and the words hang in the air between them, growing bigger and pushing them further apart. "I--" Kaidoh says and looks away. He rolls to his feet and Momo can see right up his nose again. Kaidoh picks up his jacket and leaves, tripping over Momo's tennis bag and banging the door behind him.

"Fucking idiot," Momo says, to the ceiling, to the air, "fucking idiot." He rolls onto his side, back to the door, and thinks about all the girls he's going to ask out tomorrow.

[identity profile] tehlils.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh. That was absolutely lovely. Also, I love your icon. I think I spent five minutes laughing over it before I actually started reading. :DDDD

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[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Third person Momo speaking in third person . . .rocks.

:D

*hands over the Imatrex and the blanket fort*

[identity profile] weetanya.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
God. You have the ability to put me right back in high school...

Hot and...uncomfortably realistic! Loved it.

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams*

My migraine fairies are totally about to hit on yours. Poor awkward Momo.

[identity profile] happiestwhen.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
:) I love your MomoKai so much.
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[identity profile] mananeh.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I needed that. I also feel a little guilty for wishing more migranes on you :P

Your Momo pov is always so goooooood, what with him being so...so... Momo. He's always such a horny teenage boy. And that's Momo down to a tee.
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[identity profile] vissy.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't decide what I like best, Momo's efforts at ESP or Kaidoh's sexy earwax. Or the idea of Kaidoh as a comfy quilt getting snatched away.
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[identity profile] vissy.livejournal.com 2006-10-13 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Or Momo staring up Kaido's hotass nose.

Abject is Best.

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[personal profile] venivincere 2006-10-14 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
You make them more real for me than anyone does. Your writing is clear as glass, here. The entire time reading, I felt I was as close up to them as they were to each other. I think your skill makes me swoon as much as the story does. :-D

[identity profile] sarahofcroydon.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
Gosh, I just love how you do mad desperation and horny boys. I just love it. ^____^

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Your MomoKai fics makes me so unbelievably happy. <3333333 I love it. ^.^

[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Kaidoh shouldn't be so pretty.

What an excellent addition to my lazy night. ♥

...I have a headache, too.

[identity profile] meiface.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Your MomoKai makes me happier than anyone else's MomoKai. You write them so real and stupid and wonderful and I love them so much. Your sex is just as real and hot too. Oh Hal, you make me all *_____* all the time.

[identity profile] waxrose.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Guuuuuuuuh. This was so wonderful.

[identity profile] wickedcherub.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 05:11 am (UTC)(link)
I love awkward teenage boys. And awkward teenage sex. And Momokai.

Thank you :D

[identity profile] trinityhelix.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*bites lip*

your propensity for writing horny teenaged boys leads me to believe you were once one in your past life.

oh god, how i love your momokai. XDDD

[identity profile] altricial.livejournal.com 2006-10-14 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
"He licks the underside of Kaidoh's tongue and Kaidoh squirms closer; he has this whole thing about tongues."

Hottest line ever. You make me so happy. I've been missing your MomoKai fics! I'm glad you're writing them again :D :D :D

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[identity profile] moonythestrals.livejournal.com 2006-10-15 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
um, dhakdhahdsakjhaguh?

so, like, I could say I'm not one of those really stalkerish fans of yours that has to make this huge coming-out announcement where I declare my undying devotion to you & describe in detail how your latest piece of work inspired me to OMGDELURK because you're just that awesome? I could say that, but I would've kinda failed already. so.

just stopping by to tell you that I'm going to friend you & latch around for a little while longer, 'cause you just write the most amazing characters, & I end up falling in love with them even when I don't know anything about them.

Alas, earwax!

[identity profile] leviosa8.livejournal.com 2006-10-15 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
"and Momo curls into him like he's a quilt on a January morning, ten minutes after Momo has to get up for school."

Funny how I read this before going to work yesterday, very quickly, and much later at night, I was clutching my futon like that, and thought of that line, had the mental image in my mind, and it took me a few seconds to remember it was not a scene from a doujinshi I had just read, but this drabble of yours.

That was the BEST and most tender picture of the whole scene.

[identity profile] polyurethane.livejournal.com 2006-10-16 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! More MomoKai from you.

You have this way that you write them that just... gah. It makes me incoherant.

Really great job. Yay.

[identity profile] hamburgerjack.livejournal.com 2006-10-16 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
damn it Kaidoh!

Momoshiro so wants you as his own.

XD

I really liked this. They have that, "I'll never admit I totally dig you" AtobeShishido thing...or not.

They just need to admit they love each other over stupid valentines then eat each other's candy.
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[identity profile] storyteller.livejournal.com 2006-10-16 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, oh, I love this so much. Image

You write them both so perfectly.

[identity profile] xthe-far-planex.livejournal.com 2006-10-16 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
You write them so well! ♥

So happy so see another Momokai fic. There's not enough of them <3

[identity profile] kidouche.livejournal.com 2006-10-16 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
OH HAL. I needed this. Badly. *flail* I am in love with the way you write them. In love.

[identity profile] arrankaara.livejournal.com 2006-10-17 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
*squee*

I'm definitely in a terrible need of a MomoKai fix~!! And this one is so much love! ♥♥♥♥♥

I've always loved your fics!

[identity profile] jazzyjello.livejournal.com 2006-10-17 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
Oh guh. ♥

I love the awkward moment at the end, Kaidoh tripping. It's so real and angsty.

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