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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2006-04-08 11:23 pm
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"Why not?" Fuji says, slipping, as he always does, through the net of data Inui tries to cast around him.

There is no sufficient reason to refuse, no answer to why not?. Inui puts his glasses in his pocket and bends his head to Fuji.

"I thought your eyes would be smaller," Fuji says and moves in close, his tongue finding Inui's mouth before their lips meet. He lays one hand on Inui's face, fingers splaying along his cheek.

Inui puts his hands on Fuji's waist and they kiss, open mouthed and slow, lazy breaths of air on a hot August day, no more movement than is necessary.

Fuji's body is thin and strong against Inui, like a green branch that bends impossibly far and then snaps into your face. There is something behind his kisses that says, I'm holding something back. Don't you want to know what it is?

Why not? Inui thinks. He slides one hand up inside Fuji's shirt and tries to remind himself that this is just to pass the time.

[identity profile] ponderosa121.livejournal.com 2006-04-08 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
The noise I make sounds like squeaking. It's so hard for me to ship Fuji with people but I'm there. I'm so there.

[identity profile] leviosa8.livejournal.com 2006-04-08 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. Nice image.
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[personal profile] qem_chibati 2006-04-08 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Bwhahaha. That is awesome. So very very awesome.

[identity profile] maeran.livejournal.com 2006-04-08 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I literally squeaked, "I LOVE YOU!!"

Twice.

Did I mention I love you? ♥♥♥ (<-- is totally a closet Inui/Fuji fan, it's not even funny. XD)

[identity profile] svz-insanity.livejournal.com 2006-04-08 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I love you. ♥

Oh god, they would be SO SCARY together. Think about it.... poor Seigaku.
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[personal profile] inthetatras 2006-04-09 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
What a frightening combination *evil grin* There are several lines in there that I simply adore.


*reposted to fix embarrassing typos

[identity profile] thistlefinch.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Inui/Fuji is both frightening and wonderful at the same time.

I love it.

[identity profile] goldie.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
OHHHHHH yesssss. YES YES YES. So many classic lines in such a short piece of fic.

[identity profile] sarahofcroydon.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
I don't think you could make me any happier than you already have lately!!!!!!!!! ♥

[identity profile] akatonbo.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear.

I really want to know more about what's going on there.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:42 am (UTC)(link)
*eeeeeeees long and quiet*

god I love fooling around with Fuji and Inui. It seems like i can't write fic lately without them both popping up repeated (likde youfr remix, for instance).

[identity profile] neeteeus.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
...
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...I have never, ever thought about this pairing, but lo, it is good. (and a little scary)

I love this line:

"There is something behind his kisses that says, I'm holding something back. Don't you want to know what it is?"

That captures the mystery behind Fuji so, so well.

I love how one doesn't overwhelm the other. I mean, if I had to put money on one of them to be in control, I think I'd have to go with Fuji. Feelings over data, anyday. But Inui is holding his own still and that thrills me.

I know what to ask for next time you have an open call. :D

[identity profile] bookshop.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:53 am (UTC)(link)
asdkfjsdkl;fasdjklfsl YES. FINALLY. YES YES YES. That is perfect. I love you for writing this pairing.

There is something behind his kisses that says, I'm holding something back. Don't you want to know what it is?

Why not? Inui thinks.


Exactly, Inui. EXACTLY, FANDOM. *_*

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, yes. I feel like I should quote at you, but it's a short piece and I'll end up quoting the whole thing back.

Fantastic.

[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 07:37 am (UTC)(link)
As I clicked on the comment button, I had to remind myself that I would not keyboard mash.

>.>

SECRET GUILTY PLEASURE OHMYEFFINGLORD.

Please do that again. Just...sometime....

[identity profile] seii-ryu.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 08:21 am (UTC)(link)
I was going to say something, but I totally forgot. *fangirls*

Your imagery is great, and the way you slip in little bits of fandom stuff is hilarious. Somehow Inui and Fuji both seem fragile, like...

Anyway, it's great!

[identity profile] alice-and-lain.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 11:46 am (UTC)(link)
And you're going to continue this, right? Because there is a sad, sad lack of Inui/Fuji in this world. It makes me cry into my pillow in the middle of the night, it does.
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[personal profile] flonnebonne 2006-04-09 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Is there a name for this pairing? Like "creepy stalker pair!" or something?

[identity profile] kishmet.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so awesome and perfect. ♥ I love this pairing.

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