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PoT Fic: Astigmatism (Tezuka/Oishi)
First there was oh my god fanservice (from the 30.5 fanbook, courtesy of ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
leviosa8). Then there was oh so sweet fanart by histoirede.
And then there was fanfic. Just a snippet of fluff, really. A cookie. With icing. And glasses.
[ also posted to tezukaoishi and tenipuri_yaoi ]
Astigmatism by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, Tezuka/Oishi, 350 words, G.
What do you see?
"Let's do some more problems." Oishi bent over the textbook. "If the area of each circle is pi/4 and the distance between the centre of the circles--" He broke off when Tezuka shifted beside him. "Tezuka?"
Tezuka was leaning back against the bed, his arm over his eyes, his glasses dangling from his fingers.
"I guess it's late." Oishi closed the book and slipped it in his bag. "Don't drop those." He took the glasses from Tezuka and reached to set them down on the bedside table. Then he hesitated.
He'd always wondered what it was like not to be able to see perfectly. Maybe if he looked through Tezuka's glasses, he would see what Tezuka saw without them. He put them on.
The room seemed to bend and it made him feel almost dizzy. If he were standing, he wasn't sure he would be able walk safely. The lights were shinier and distorted. Nothing was where it should be, the world was strange and Oishi thought it would fall in on him at any moment.
"Oishi." Oishi turned his head and Tezuka -- recognizable only by his voice -- came into view. Oishi's head began to ache as his eyes struggled to focus. "Give those back." Tezuka touched Oishi's temple, slid until he found the glasses. He pulled them off Oishi's face and the world snapped back into its proper dimensions.
Tezuka lifted them to put them on, but Oishi caught his wrist. "Wait," he said. "What do you see?" Tezuka blinked once. He looked younger without his glasses, Oishi thought. He looked almost vulnerable.
"There are no sharp lines," Tezuka said. "Everything bleeds into everything else. There are no details. The lamp is a ball of light, three times as big." His eyes flicked over to the window. "The streetlights are pretty."
"What about me?" Tezuka looked back and Oishi thought how large his eyes were.
"I can't see your face," Tezuka said. "I can't see your eyes."
Oishi leaned in until their noses were almost touching. "How about now?"
"Now I'm cross-eyed," Tezuka said.
"So am I," Oishi said and he could feel Tezuka's smile when he kissed him.
leviosa8). Then there was oh so sweet fanart by histoirede.And then there was fanfic. Just a snippet of fluff, really. A cookie. With icing. And glasses.
[ also posted to tezukaoishi and tenipuri_yaoi ]
Astigmatism by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, Tezuka/Oishi, 350 words, G.
What do you see?
"Let's do some more problems." Oishi bent over the textbook. "If the area of each circle is pi/4 and the distance between the centre of the circles--" He broke off when Tezuka shifted beside him. "Tezuka?"
Tezuka was leaning back against the bed, his arm over his eyes, his glasses dangling from his fingers.
"I guess it's late." Oishi closed the book and slipped it in his bag. "Don't drop those." He took the glasses from Tezuka and reached to set them down on the bedside table. Then he hesitated.
He'd always wondered what it was like not to be able to see perfectly. Maybe if he looked through Tezuka's glasses, he would see what Tezuka saw without them. He put them on.
The room seemed to bend and it made him feel almost dizzy. If he were standing, he wasn't sure he would be able walk safely. The lights were shinier and distorted. Nothing was where it should be, the world was strange and Oishi thought it would fall in on him at any moment.
"Oishi." Oishi turned his head and Tezuka -- recognizable only by his voice -- came into view. Oishi's head began to ache as his eyes struggled to focus. "Give those back." Tezuka touched Oishi's temple, slid until he found the glasses. He pulled them off Oishi's face and the world snapped back into its proper dimensions.
Tezuka lifted them to put them on, but Oishi caught his wrist. "Wait," he said. "What do you see?" Tezuka blinked once. He looked younger without his glasses, Oishi thought. He looked almost vulnerable.
"There are no sharp lines," Tezuka said. "Everything bleeds into everything else. There are no details. The lamp is a ball of light, three times as big." His eyes flicked over to the window. "The streetlights are pretty."
"What about me?" Tezuka looked back and Oishi thought how large his eyes were.
"I can't see your face," Tezuka said. "I can't see your eyes."
Oishi leaned in until their noses were almost touching. "How about now?"
"Now I'm cross-eyed," Tezuka said.
"So am I," Oishi said and he could feel Tezuka's smile when he kissed him.
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Tezuka lifted them to put them on, but Oishi caught his wrist. "Wait," he said. "What do you see?" Tezuka blinked once. He looked younger without his glasses, Oishi thought. He looked almost vulnerable.
There is so much omfgyes in that paragraph I feel about to burst from otp love.
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And I would so draw some if Oishi's hair didn't drive me crazy. I cannot ever get it looking proper.
p.s. I have like three more InuTez books lined up to scan. :o
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* cover it up with an ugly touque, like Konomi did a few issues back
* set the drawing in Opposite World where everyone *except* Kaidoh wears a bandana
* have Oishi in the hospital recovering from brain surgery
* draw second-year Oishi -- he has normal hair then
* use cleverly positioned elements like trees, tennis racquets, and small dogs to hide Oishi's hair
* cross-dressing
* Eiji cuts off Oishi's horrible bangs; Tezuka comforts Oishi
I have like three more InuTez books lined up to scan.
Oooooh! *salivates* Tezuka is such a slut.
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Wait, I will try to get a better pic of the page, so that your icon doesn't look badly illuminated ^^''' Then you choose whether you change it or not. It looks like sunrays on Oishi's face, but still...
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http://www.livejournal.com/users/leviosa8/310177.html
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Glasses pr0n. I love it.
(Now I'd like to see Tezuka in that...hair net thingie.)
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The cross-hatching on Oishi's hair always makes me think of Archie Andrews' hair, actually.
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"There are no sharp lines," Tezuka said. "Everything bleeds into everything else. There are no details. The lamp is a ball of light, three times as big." His eyes flicked over to the window. "The streetlights are pretty."
You have such a wonderful way with words. *has melted* Just... aww.
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*cries*
There's nothing better in the world than TezuOishi fluff ;_;
... you made my day, and it's only 9am here.
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Konomi draws a pic.
I'm drawing a pic.
You write a story.
I make a dôjinshi.
... I should send the dôjinshi to Konomi-sensei, maybe ? ^^;
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(And there would be a song on how much streetlights are pretty when you can't see properly !)
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yay for fanservice! ^_^
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And then I remember the Starbuck boxing scene and I realise that I am. *g*
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Dôjinshi ^^;
Here it is, so you can check if there's something atrocious that's totally not like you had seen it. (Well, the big difference is that there are no thoughts because I suck at including thoughts in dôjinshi X3)
Don't pay attention to my beautiful hand-writing and unmatched ball-pen drawing skills, I did the whole thing in one hour ^^; *eek, drawing a "vulnerable"-looking Tezuka and a "cross-eyed" Tezuka XD*
Read it from right to left ^-^ (yes, I know, I'm weird ^^;)
Hmm, the kiss scene will certainly look more like that (except the other way around and sitting on the floor) :
Re: Dôjinshi ^^;
* I overstated the case when I said the lamp was "three times as big". A small bulb might be, but a larger one wouldn't be. Maybe just "twice as big". (But Christmas tree lights get huge! They're a lot prettier with my glasses off. Streetlights too.)
* Maybe change Oishi's line "What do you see?" to "Without your glasses, what do you see?" That will be clearer.
Vulnerable!Tezuka and CrossEyed!Tezuka are both very cute and Oishi is just lovely.
I should feel guilty for encouraging you when you have other things to do, but I don't. :)
Re: Dôjinshi ^^;
> bulb might be, but a larger one wouldn't be. Maybe just "twice as big".
>(But Christmas tree lights get huge! They're a lot prettier with my glasses
>off. Streetlights too.)
OK ^o^ Corrected. That's the kind of things I would not know ^^;
(I'm like Oishi, I wonder what it's like to not see properly X3)
>* Maybe change Oishi's line "What do you see?" to "Without your glasses,
>what do you see?" That will be clearer.
Yup. I was feeling it was weird in dôjinshi-form. And I'll add some "..." in some places, too, if you don't mind ^-^
>Vulnerable!Tezuka and CrossEyed!Tezuka are both very cute
... and a bit too ukeish X3
> and Oishi is just lovely.
Thanks ^-^
>I should feel guilty for encouraging you when you have other things to do,
>but I don't. :)
Don't, don't X3 I did it all on my own !
And now that it's done, it's done... But I don't know when I'll work on the proper version, though. (I don't even know even I want to do it traditionally or digitally ^^;)
Re: Dôjinshi ^^;
When I was in junior high, my friends liked to borrow my glasses and then jump from the stage to the gym floor while wearing them, because everything was so weird and disorienting. We lived in a small town, so I guess there was nothing better to do. *g*
... and a bit too ukeish
Well, that's easily solved by making Oishi the ÜberSeme of DOOOOOOM. He can push poor frail Tezuka down and ravish him while Tezuka cries and then tell him it's his own fault for being so attractive.
Or, you know, whatever you think would work. *g*
Add in all the "..." that you like. :) Let me know if there are other things that sound strange to you.
I'll look forward to when you have time to finish it up!
Re: Dôjinshi ^^;
Oh, I've wear a certain number of correction glasses for fun, but I've always wondered if the distortion was the same for the... the... hmm, *don't remember the English word for people who don't see correctly*
After all, glasses are lenses that correct their distortion, why would they give someone with proper eyes the exact distortion they correct ?
And wearing glasses makes people feel dizzy... I guess someone who doesn't see properly doesn't get dizzy when not wearing glasses... so it can't be the same thing ! *<= I've thought that much about it*
Well, that's easily solved by making Oishi the ÜberSeme of DOOOOOOM. He can push poor frail Tezuka down and ravish him while Tezuka cries and then tell him it's his own fault for being so attractive.
... Do as I hadn't say anything.
(But it's all Tezuka's fault for being so attractive ! I'm sure it is !)
Or, you know, whatever you think would work. *g*
Well, as long as someone ravishes someone else, I'm happy. (I see the pairing as quite reversible, even if I root more fore Tezuka x Oishi ^-^;)
Add in all the "..." that you like. :) Let me know if there are other things that sound strange to you.
For the moment, nothing, but I'll give it to read to some other people to see ^^
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