PoT Fic: Miscalculation (InuTez)

[prillalar]

I promised ponderosa121 anything if she would draw Inui/Tezuka. Fortunately, she only asked for an accompanying ficlet, not my immortal soul.

View the art, Messing with Formulas (worksafe), and if you can bear to tear your eyes away from it (oh my god it is so delicious), come back and read the story.


Miscalculation by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuTez, PG-13, 400 words.
Be careful what you ask for.


Inui was two minutes early for their meeting. "What is it, Tezuka?"

"I need your help." Tezuka pointed to the chalkboard. "I'm using the formula but not getting the expected result."

Inui bent over Tezuka's homework paper. "You've copied it down incorrectly. It's 5x, not 3x. So all your calculations are off."

"Thank you."

"It's not like you to make such a simple error, even though the writing on the board is untidy." Inui said. He adjusted his glasses. "Perhaps you are somewhat off-balance today."

"Perhaps," Tezuka said.

"This is a good opportunity." Inui moved closer to Tezuka, much closer than usual. Tezuka took a step backward. Inui took a step forward. Tezuka moved backward again, but Inui moved with him and all at once Tezuka's back was against the chalkboard and Inui's arm was around him.

"Inui." Tezuka got his hand onto Inui's chest and pushed, but Inui was solid as a tree trunk. "Is this about my data?"

"This is an unrelated matter." Inui brushed his fingers over Tezuka's cheek. "There is only a 2% chance that you will call for help," Inui said. "Because you won't want anyone to see you in this situation." He smiled what Momoshiro called "Inui-senpai's Evil Smile #5" and then he kissed Tezuka.

Tezuka's head banged against the chalkboard. Inui's hand was on his face, holding it still. Inui's mouth pushed until Tezuka's lips parted. Inui slid his tongue along Tezuka's, chasing it when Tezuka moved it away. And then he did it again. And again. Until Tezuka's mouth was watering and his knees were shaking and it was only the iron in his soul and Inui's arm around his waist keeping him from sliding to the floor.

Then Inui let him go. Tezuka wiped his tingling mouth with the back of his hand. "Inui."

"Don't worry, Tezuka. I won't try this method of attack again." Inui smiled again. "It won't work if you're expecting it." He left the classroom.

Tezuka sat down at a desk and waited. He couldn't leave until his breathing returned to normal. He closed his eyes and swallowed, remembering the weight of Inui's body pressing against him, the heat of Inui's mouth. Then he crumpled the homework paper into a ball and tossed it into the trash. He smiled.

Asking Fuji's advice had been the right thing after all.

Comments

[darkeyedwolf.livejournal.com]

OH GOD, BETWEEN THE TWO OF YOU I'M GOING TO START SHIPPING THIS, I JUST KNOW IT. Inui's mouth pushed until Tezuka's lips parted. Inui slid his tongue along Tezuka's, chasing it when Tezuka moved it away. And then he did it again. And again. Until Tezuka's mouth was watering and his knees were shaking and it was only the iron in his soul and Inui's arm around his waist keeping him from sliding to the floor. -- akshfgs;fga *MELTS*

[akatonbo.livejournal.com]

*glee*

[miko-no-da.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Oh, that was perfect. Go Tezuka!

And OMG that picture. *whines* I wanna draw HALF that good...

[chibimono.livejournal.com]

And I thought Inui was evil! Tezuka so planned that! >D

[ponderosa121.livejournal.com]

Oh, melt. Evil smile and glasses adjusting and I still firmly believe you write the best kisses ever. :D~~

...also, sneaky Tezuka.

Ditching work for a few hours to draw that pic was so~o worth it. >:D

[trinityhelix.livejournal.com]

YOU BOTH OWN MY SOUL. *weeps*

I love Inui/Tezuka, I really really do. *_*

[grandevina.livejournal.com]

I bet you could write any PoT pairing and I would love it, even if I hated the pairing before hand.

[histoirede.livejournal.com]

ZOMG the end oO;
Very nice ficlet !

[bookshop.livejournal.com]

You know, whenever people talk about Fuji/Tezuka, I'm sort of like, "but why? He interacts with Inui just as much! Why aren't there more Inui/Tezuka shippers?" Not that I intend to become one, mind you, so just get that idea out of your head, missy!--but then you go and write things like this, and how can anyone not see the appeal. :D And this is just begging for backstory, backstory with lots of slow buildup and tension and data-exchanging-as-sexual metaphor.

Lovely, lovely job as always.

[chaosraven.livejournal.com]

Wheee! I have always adored your Inui, and seeing you write him with Tezuka just makes it that much better. Thanks!

[pixxers.livejournal.com]

Someone linked me to your InuKai stuff. My panties almost burst into flames. Now I can't decide on a favorite pairing. ^__^

[aurora-bet.livejournal.com]

hi! jumped over from tenipuri_yaoi ^_^

fweee!!!! inuitez!!! *griiiiiiiiiins* there's just not enough love for this pairing! *pouts*

i looooove your devious!tez. XD it's always the quiet ones you don't suspect, lol. *hugs fuji for being so helpful* ^_~ this was just lovely *happy sigh*

[love]

*laughing* It's so hard to see Tezuka as devious. Yamato, sure, but who knew toast-buchou had this in him? :)

[knw.livejournal.com]

So I just saw the link to this and... ♥ I was wondering how one would make this pairing work - it seems more difficult to pull off that anything I write at the moment. Really nicely done, even if this feedback is a little overdue ♥

[schythr.livejournal.com]

That was wonderful! XDD Inui thinks he's got it all under control... I love how you seem to be able to incorporate some of Fuji's all-powerfulness into most of your fics. <3
The only thing that saddens me is the fact that the picture link doesn't go anywhere. Ah well.

[mnemo-syne.livejournal.com]

I'm deeply in love with TezuRyo, but this is great. Darn you! :D So much fun.