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PoT Fic: B-Plot (MomoKai)
Note 1: I had this idea to write a Ryoma story with a MomoKai side-story. But I never thought of a plot for the Ryoma story, so I just wrote the bits where Momo talks to Ryoma about Kaidoh. Just cut and paste them into your favourite Ryoma story. *g*
Note 2: I do have some InuKai in progress but it will be a little while.
B-Plot by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, MomoKai, PG13, 900 words.
The course of true love never did run smooth.
B-Plot
"Momo-senpai, I thought you would be with Kaidoh-senpai."
"That jerk! I hope I never see him again as long as I live."
"Oh. Do you want to play tennis?"
"I was just helping Tachibana An with her serve and then that idiot Mamushi came along and yelled at me for flirting with her. So I yelled at him for yelling at me. And then stupid Kamio came along and yelled at me for flirting with An. And then Kaidoh yelled at him for flirting with me. And then they yelled at each other and then they went off together to play tennis. At least that's what they said they were doing."
"So do you want to play tennis or not?"
"Do you think I'm a flirt?"
***
"What's that mark on your neck, Momo-senpai?"
"I cut myself shaving."
"That's not a cut and you don't need to shave."
"Shut up, Echizen."
***
"Let's play tennis, Momo-senpai."
"I'm too depressed."
"Oh."
"See, I was going to go hang out with Kaidoh but then he told me that he had to go train with Inui-senpai so I asked Eiji-senpai to ask Fuji-senpai to ask Inui-senpai what he wanted with Kaidoh. And then Eiji-senpai told me that Fuji-senpai told him that Inui-senpai said that I should buy myself a pet hamster because I was going to be spending a lot of lonely nights from now on and so I told Kaidoh that Inui-senpai was just interested in one thing and Kaidoh yelled at me that I was always jealous and that of course Inui-senpai just wanted to help him improve his tennis for the good of Seigaku and now they're probably making out."
"So do you want to play or not?"
"Do you think they'd see us if we spy on them?"
***
"Momo-senpai, why were you so late for practice today?"
"Special training."
"Then why did you and Kaidoh-senpai have to run so many laps?"
"Just serve the damn ball, Echizen."
***
"Where's your racquet, Momo-senpai?"
"Oh, I guess I forgot it. Who cares about stupid tennis anyhow?"
"..."
"You know how Inui-senpai wasn't at practice today? Well, Eiji-senpai told me that Oishi-senpai saw him in the hallway at school and there was a bruise on his face. I asked Kaidoh about it and he said the Inui-senpai had actually tried to put the moves on him but Kaidoh punched him and that's why Inui-senpai was all beaten up. So then I said, 'I told you so' to Kaidoh. But the stupid snake got mad and punched me too! I punched him back, but he dodged and I fell down and got all muddy. At least it didn't leave a bruise."
"Are you going to go and get your racquet?"
"I don't think it left a bruise. Is my face bruised?"
***
"Are you ready to go?"
"I can't go out for hamburgers with you today, Echizen."
"Oh, okay."
"Because I ran into Kaidoh in the club room and he said he was sorry for beating me up and even though he hadn't beaten me up, I only fell down because I tripped, I said that it was okay and I was sorry that I had beaten him up too and he said that I hadn't even come close to beating him up and it would be a cold day in hell before I could beat him up and so I shoved him and then he shoved me and then I shoved him again and then he kissed me and we made out against the lockers until Horio came in and disturbed us."
"Please don't tell me these things, Momo-senpai."
"So we're going over to his house. Do you think Horio will tell anyone?"
***
"Are we actually going to play tennis today, Momo-senpai?"
"I don't know why I bother."
"You're not that bad at tennis."
"I went to meet Kaidoh at street tennis but that creepy St Rudolph guy, Mizuki, was hanging all over him. I told Kaidoh that he wouldn't have creepy guys trying to pick him up all the time if he stopped dressing like a rent boy and then he got all pissed off and said that at least he didn't look like he dressed himself from a thrift store. And all the time that creep Mizuki was holding him by the arm and giving me this creepy grin. I tried to get Kaidoh away, but then Mizuki made Fuji's little brother challenge me to a match so of course I had to play and by the time we were done, stupid Mamushi and Mizuki had gone off to go shopping together."
"What's a rent boy?"
"Uh..."
***
"Hi Momo-senpai, this is Echizen calling. I guess I'll leave a message on your voice mail. I was going to ask you to play tennis today but when I saw you and Kaidoh-senpai in the club room, you looked a little busy. But Fuji-senpai said he'd play with me, so I guess that's what I'll be doing from now on. Oh, and I hope you didn't trip over Horio. He fainted so we left him there. So, talk to you later."
"Ready to go play, Echizen?"
"Don't you need to get your racquet, Fuji-senpai?"
"Oh, play tennis. Well, we can do that too."
"What do you mean by that?"
"You'll see, Echizen. You'll see."
Note 2: I do have some InuKai in progress but it will be a little while.
B-Plot by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, MomoKai, PG13, 900 words.
The course of true love never did run smooth.
B-Plot
"Momo-senpai, I thought you would be with Kaidoh-senpai."
"That jerk! I hope I never see him again as long as I live."
"Oh. Do you want to play tennis?"
"I was just helping Tachibana An with her serve and then that idiot Mamushi came along and yelled at me for flirting with her. So I yelled at him for yelling at me. And then stupid Kamio came along and yelled at me for flirting with An. And then Kaidoh yelled at him for flirting with me. And then they yelled at each other and then they went off together to play tennis. At least that's what they said they were doing."
"So do you want to play tennis or not?"
"Do you think I'm a flirt?"
***
"What's that mark on your neck, Momo-senpai?"
"I cut myself shaving."
"That's not a cut and you don't need to shave."
"Shut up, Echizen."
***
"Let's play tennis, Momo-senpai."
"I'm too depressed."
"Oh."
"See, I was going to go hang out with Kaidoh but then he told me that he had to go train with Inui-senpai so I asked Eiji-senpai to ask Fuji-senpai to ask Inui-senpai what he wanted with Kaidoh. And then Eiji-senpai told me that Fuji-senpai told him that Inui-senpai said that I should buy myself a pet hamster because I was going to be spending a lot of lonely nights from now on and so I told Kaidoh that Inui-senpai was just interested in one thing and Kaidoh yelled at me that I was always jealous and that of course Inui-senpai just wanted to help him improve his tennis for the good of Seigaku and now they're probably making out."
"So do you want to play or not?"
"Do you think they'd see us if we spy on them?"
***
"Momo-senpai, why were you so late for practice today?"
"Special training."
"Then why did you and Kaidoh-senpai have to run so many laps?"
"Just serve the damn ball, Echizen."
***
"Where's your racquet, Momo-senpai?"
"Oh, I guess I forgot it. Who cares about stupid tennis anyhow?"
"..."
"You know how Inui-senpai wasn't at practice today? Well, Eiji-senpai told me that Oishi-senpai saw him in the hallway at school and there was a bruise on his face. I asked Kaidoh about it and he said the Inui-senpai had actually tried to put the moves on him but Kaidoh punched him and that's why Inui-senpai was all beaten up. So then I said, 'I told you so' to Kaidoh. But the stupid snake got mad and punched me too! I punched him back, but he dodged and I fell down and got all muddy. At least it didn't leave a bruise."
"Are you going to go and get your racquet?"
"I don't think it left a bruise. Is my face bruised?"
***
"Are you ready to go?"
"I can't go out for hamburgers with you today, Echizen."
"Oh, okay."
"Because I ran into Kaidoh in the club room and he said he was sorry for beating me up and even though he hadn't beaten me up, I only fell down because I tripped, I said that it was okay and I was sorry that I had beaten him up too and he said that I hadn't even come close to beating him up and it would be a cold day in hell before I could beat him up and so I shoved him and then he shoved me and then I shoved him again and then he kissed me and we made out against the lockers until Horio came in and disturbed us."
"Please don't tell me these things, Momo-senpai."
"So we're going over to his house. Do you think Horio will tell anyone?"
***
"Are we actually going to play tennis today, Momo-senpai?"
"I don't know why I bother."
"You're not that bad at tennis."
"I went to meet Kaidoh at street tennis but that creepy St Rudolph guy, Mizuki, was hanging all over him. I told Kaidoh that he wouldn't have creepy guys trying to pick him up all the time if he stopped dressing like a rent boy and then he got all pissed off and said that at least he didn't look like he dressed himself from a thrift store. And all the time that creep Mizuki was holding him by the arm and giving me this creepy grin. I tried to get Kaidoh away, but then Mizuki made Fuji's little brother challenge me to a match so of course I had to play and by the time we were done, stupid Mamushi and Mizuki had gone off to go shopping together."
"What's a rent boy?"
"Uh..."
***
"Hi Momo-senpai, this is Echizen calling. I guess I'll leave a message on your voice mail. I was going to ask you to play tennis today but when I saw you and Kaidoh-senpai in the club room, you looked a little busy. But Fuji-senpai said he'd play with me, so I guess that's what I'll be doing from now on. Oh, and I hope you didn't trip over Horio. He fainted so we left him there. So, talk to you later."
"Ready to go play, Echizen?"
"Don't you need to get your racquet, Fuji-senpai?"
"Oh, play tennis. Well, we can do that too."
"What do you mean by that?"
"You'll see, Echizen. You'll see."
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This fandom is slowly going to erode any sense of OTP that I have left, isn't it?
I'm full of Ryouma love tonight, which made this extra-amusing, but I may change my mind when I reread what I wrote today. So was not expecting my first real foray into TeniPuri fanfiction to be his POV.
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It's interesting how much writing a character can make you like them. I suppose it's the need to see from their perspective. Good luck with the story!
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I usually consider myself someone who can write any character's POV if given a good enough reason to do so, and I know I'll usually like them after I've done it, or at least find them interesting. PoT is probably a really good fandom for me because there are so many characters to love in the first place. Perhaps someday I'll make people challenge me with POVs, after I get some of the specific things I want to do out of the way.
...I'm really running at the mouth about PoT lately. *applies appropriate icon*
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And if you can ramble, so can I, so I shall now go on about pairings. And I will add a disclaimer that the order of the names in the pairing has no special relevence to me.
My two main pairings (by interest) are InuKai and TezuRyo. And I think that's really my only Ryoma pairing. I included the FujiRyo here as kind of a joke to myself because it's a popular pairing that I just don't *get*. I don't really like TezuFuji, but I understand it. FujiRyo--not so much.
The MomoKai is gaining on those two, I have to admit. They're so sparky -- it's all the bickering. And Momo is one of my favourite POV characters of all time, in any fandom.
I am interested in InuiFuji as well, though maybe not enough to write any. But I love how they always stand beside each other at matches and say stuff like, "Did you see that too?" in mysterious voices that make me wonder if they're just making it all up.
InuiTez I like a lot in theory, but I think it's mostly one-sided for Inui. Next to TezuRyo, my favouite Tezuka pairing is TezuOishi. I'm trying to write some, but it hasn't got very far yet.
I think that's about it for Seigaku non-crack pairings. I admit to not really being thrilled by GP, and often I don't even find them slashy! I get into these arguments with the Boy over it. "But they're so married!" "No, see, if they really were dating, then this and this never would have happened like that."
Anyhow, mostly it comes down to my motto: If Kaidoh's happy, then I'm happy.
It's interesting how I feel about characters while I'm writing them. Some of them irritate me beyond measure and some I fall in love with.
And that's my much more than two cents. :)
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I love you and want to have your babies.
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heeeee
It's the rhythm of Ryoma to Momo that makes these little snippets.
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My god. What a bunch of pervs...I *love* it!
Also, What's a rent boy? *giggles*
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"What's a rent boy?"
"Uh..."
that made my day. XD
oh, and this too:
"Oh, play tennis. Well, we can do that too."
fuji<3!
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Mizuki and Kaidoh shopping together XD. I love your humor fic. Well, I like all of it, but Momo's just such a dork <3.
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And I am very curious about the shopping trip! Will Kaidoh end up with something ultra-flowery or will he buy yet another sleeveless shirt?
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...if he shows up on an official calendar or promotional picture in a sleeveless flowery shirt, we'll know whose fault it is :D.
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Fuji is ever the opportunist. Ryouma won't even know what hit him. XD
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I'm quite curious about the shopping trip, myself. *g*
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...and the bit with Fuji in the end was pure, unadulterated crack. ^_^ Good times to be had by all!
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I'm such a InuKai fan, but this is hilarious. The conversations are wonderful and poor oblivious!Ryoma.
"Oh, play tennis. Well, we can do that too."
XD I wonder if it's possible to play strip tennis. *ponders*
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Haha, poor Ryoma having to put up with Momo's constant ranting. And Kaidoh "beating up" Inui. XD And as a diehard Thrill Pair fan, the FujiRyo hints just make me squee. ^___^.
Lovely & fun & well-written. <3
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FUJIRYO HINTS. *screams and dies* I LOVE YOU. ♥
Momo-chan's POV is so amusing.
The rapport is amusing.
Indeed, Kaidoh dresses like a rent boy. And ends up looking like a sex god (what on earth ARE his parents thinking?!)
But my God will always be Fuji Syuusuke. ALWAYS.
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Indeed, Kaidoh dresses like a rent boy. And ends up looking like a sex god (what on earth ARE his parents thinking?!)
I'm just glad he does. *g*
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And I'm really cracking up with laughtereverytime Momo speaks. He reminds me of Shinji while I was reading this one.
*laughs*
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ending was hilarious with fuji
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