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- fuu,
- jin,
- mugen,
- samurai champloo
Champloo Fic: The Night Before
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teleute12, who requested Jin/Mugen/Fuu (Samurai Champloo). R, 300 words.
The Night Before
Fuu poured the last of the sake down her throat while Mugen grabbed ineffectually at the cup. Jin was already lying on the floor, glasses askew and hand on his forehead.
"Don't be so selfish," Mugen said and fell over. He thought, as he was falling, that it was going to hurt when he hit the floor. But then it didn't. At first, he thought that maybe he was just too drunk to feel anything. But it turned out he had fallen on something soft.
"You're heavy," Fuu said and pushed at Mugen.
"You're soft," Mugen said. Jin groaned and struggled to sit up. Mugen wondered if he should sit up too. But then he realised that he was on top of a girl. So instead, he squeezed her.
She giggled so he figured that meant it was time for sex. She giggled some more as Mugen tried to open her kimono. It didn't work. She had to do it for him. Then he got his pants out of the way and went to stick his dick inside of her. That didn't work either.
"You're soft too," she said and laughed and laughed. But she put her hand around his dick and did this thing that really, really surprised him and then everything was fine.
She put her legs around his waist and he fucked her. "Jin, Jin," she said, and that confused Mugen because he was Mugen, not Jin.
I'm Mugen, he said, only it came out as "I'm drunk." Fuu laughed again.
"Wait," she said. "Who won the drinking contest?"
"I won," Mugen said. "I'm the winner." But then he felt Jin's hands close over his hips, and something troubling brushing against his ass, and now he wasn't so sure.
teleute12, who requested Jin/Mugen/Fuu (Samurai Champloo). R, 300 words.The Night Before
Fuu poured the last of the sake down her throat while Mugen grabbed ineffectually at the cup. Jin was already lying on the floor, glasses askew and hand on his forehead.
"Don't be so selfish," Mugen said and fell over. He thought, as he was falling, that it was going to hurt when he hit the floor. But then it didn't. At first, he thought that maybe he was just too drunk to feel anything. But it turned out he had fallen on something soft.
"You're heavy," Fuu said and pushed at Mugen.
"You're soft," Mugen said. Jin groaned and struggled to sit up. Mugen wondered if he should sit up too. But then he realised that he was on top of a girl. So instead, he squeezed her.
She giggled so he figured that meant it was time for sex. She giggled some more as Mugen tried to open her kimono. It didn't work. She had to do it for him. Then he got his pants out of the way and went to stick his dick inside of her. That didn't work either.
"You're soft too," she said and laughed and laughed. But she put her hand around his dick and did this thing that really, really surprised him and then everything was fine.
She put her legs around his waist and he fucked her. "Jin, Jin," she said, and that confused Mugen because he was Mugen, not Jin.
I'm Mugen, he said, only it came out as "I'm drunk." Fuu laughed again.
"Wait," she said. "Who won the drinking contest?"
"I won," Mugen said. "I'm the winner." But then he felt Jin's hands close over his hips, and something troubling brushing against his ass, and now he wasn't so sure.
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I don't even know this fandom -- though I've heard enough good things that I think I should -- but that was an adorable little snippet. Love the ending.
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^__^ Jin/Mugen thrills me.
And since Fuu isn't *all* that annoying, really (I mean, she COULD be a Mayura or something), threesomes are cool too.
I really love the stripped-down style that you wrote this in. It's almost all factual, because the insight you provide into their thoughts sounds exactly like the actions you explain: like there is no mental uncertainty, no gray areas.
Except that the whole state of the fic, drunknenness, creates massive gray areas.
Which makes the contrast super cool.
Nice job.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's always a fun challenge writing something so short and still getting a story into it.
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