Arai is a mystery. Usually characters of his kind just get on everyone's nerves, but he's quite popular in the fandom. I guess he's endearing, in a pathetic kind of way.
As for MomoKai, I started to really *see* it after the bathroom scene and the pillow-fight at the training camp. There's absolutely no doubt that those scene were inserted to throw hints at fangirls. lol
Thank you for offering to discuss my fic. Right now it's still a sorry mess, so I won't bother you with it yet. But if you want to help me, you can comment this fic: http://www.txq.nu/jumpyboys/viewstory.php?sid=153 My first fic ever... I'm so proud to have finished it. My worst fear as a beginner was to become one of those fans who post a few chapters, then get stuck and stop updating! But I have to admit that all the reviews I got by email or at ff.net (more than 100! It made me so happy) kept me going. I would tell you the pairings, but the plot relies on the mystery. Anyway, you know my tastes... ^_^ I'm not looking for compliments, what I want is to improve as fast as possible. Any advice from a good writer is welcome. The fic is rather long though, so if you don't have time it's ok.
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As for MomoKai, I started to really *see* it after the bathroom scene and the pillow-fight at the training camp. There's absolutely no doubt that those scene were inserted to throw hints at fangirls. lol
Thank you for offering to discuss my fic. Right now it's still a sorry mess, so I won't bother you with it yet. But if you want to help me, you can comment this fic:
http://www.txq.nu/jumpyboys/viewstory.php?sid=153
My first fic ever... I'm so proud to have finished it. My worst fear as a beginner was to become one of those fans who post a few chapters, then get stuck and stop updating! But I have to admit that all the reviews I got by email or at ff.net (more than 100! It made me so happy) kept me going.
I would tell you the pairings, but the plot relies on the mystery. Anyway, you know my tastes... ^_^
I'm not looking for compliments, what I want is to improve as fast as possible. Any advice from a good writer is welcome. The fic is rather long though, so if you don't have time it's ok.