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prillalar ([personal profile] prillalar) wrote2004-06-22 10:29 pm

HP Kissage: Ron/Draco

I declare this the Week of Boy Kissage! Or for however long I can keep it up, anyhow.

First up, Harry Potter.
Ron/Draco. PG13. 300 words. Kissing.



Nothing

Ron's back was against the wall and his hands were under Draco Malfoy's shirt. Ron's eyes were closed, but he knew that if he opened them, he'd see Draco watching. Draco always watched, eyes narrowed and resentful.

They met here almost every day, in an alcove behind a suit of armour that clanked and clucked and then gave up being horrified at last when Ron and Draco paid it no attention.

They met and one of them would lean against the other and push him back and they would suck each other's mouths in hot, slippery kisses that went on for five minutes at a time.

It was nothing, Ron told himself every day: every morning when he woke up, every afternoon when he left the alcove, sweating, throbbing, heading for the bath. Every night when he lay in bed curled up into himself. It was just kissing.

It was just kissing, he told himself when Draco's tongue slipped past Ron's lips and made Ron's mouth water. Just a bit of fun, when Ron slid his fingers over Draco's arms, chest, waist, searching for a patch of skin to touch. Just fooling about, when Draco left a livid mark on Ron's neck that Ron couldn't charm away.

It was nothing.

They didn't talk and they didn't write and they didn't look at each other in the Great Hall.

They just kissed. Draco's knee was between Ron's legs and his hand was on Ron's neck, twisting in Ron's hair. Ron stroked Draco's back, both hands up and down, over bare skin.

Draco tasted like spearmint and Ron didn't like it. Draco's mouth was cold and tingly and different. Why had Draco done that? Ron opened his eyes. Draco's eyes were closed and he sighed when Ron pulled him closer.

It was nothing.

[identity profile] wickedcherub.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that last paragraph and the last line :)

Is it supposed to be formatted like that? It throws me.

[identity profile] wickedcherub.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
I think it's easier to read shorter lines too, it was just odd, I kept pausing at the end of the line as if it was a poem or something.

Maybe it's just me.

[identity profile] ellensmithee.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! I'm in love with this drabble. :-)

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
I just read this three, maybe four times in a row. It's compelling, especially the shift when Draco uses mouthwash and Ron still clings to his hope that it's nothing. When it's clearly something. Wonderful.

Icarus

[identity profile] lrodell.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
=)
yesss, kissing is good^^

twist

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_inbetween_/ 2004-06-23 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
I love that last paragraph and the last line

me too :)

[identity profile] bowdlerized.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm yum. This does a lot in so few words.

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
This is just stunning. The last bit just about killed me. Perfect.

[identity profile] jeddy83.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
Ah well, if it's more boy kissage like this, I say bring it on. :D

[identity profile] neeteeus.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Yum!

I love the mouthwash bit. It really strikes home with me.

Loved it! I'll be back tomorrow to see the next kiss!
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[identity profile] cageyklio.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:19 am (UTC)(link)
I ::heart:: the Week of Boy Kissage. I hope there's Doggett kissage. And Luke Skywalker. And and and and...
ext_14405: (heart (madmadharri))

[identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
mmm. wow. gorgeous.

Why had Draco done that?

ah. gets me right here, ya know?

[identity profile] shrift.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
They met and one of them would lean against the other and push him back and they would suck each other's mouths in hot, slippery kisses that went on for five minutes at a time.

Mmm. Angry-hot-slippery-in-denial-boykissage. Yummy. I now totally see the way and the light of Ron/Draco.

[identity profile] laurakaye.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmmm, boykissage.

Mmmmmmmmm, Draco/Ron.

*hearts*

[identity profile] leodormiens.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
You know what, yours are the only drabbles I ever read. And this one is an example of just why.
*sigh*

[identity profile] muguet-au-bois.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 07:47 am (UTC)(link)
PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

[identity profile] shatterglass.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
BOYKISSAGE. -friends-

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
That last line... *sighs with Draco* So well written. Lunch and boy kissing - I am so happy. Thank you!

Re: twist

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_inbetween_/ 2004-06-23 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
i can only be a hopeless romantic if it is well hidden :)

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