HP Kissage: Ron/Draco

[prillalar]

I declare this the Week of Boy Kissage! Or for however long I can keep it up, anyhow.

First up, Harry Potter.
Ron/Draco. PG13. 300 words. Kissing.



Nothing

Ron's back was against the wall and his hands were under Draco Malfoy's shirt. Ron's eyes were closed, but he knew that if he opened them, he'd see Draco watching. Draco always watched, eyes narrowed and resentful.

They met here almost every day, in an alcove behind a suit of armour that clanked and clucked and then gave up being horrified at last when Ron and Draco paid it no attention.

They met and one of them would lean against the other and push him back and they would suck each other's mouths in hot, slippery kisses that went on for five minutes at a time.

It was nothing, Ron told himself every day: every morning when he woke up, every afternoon when he left the alcove, sweating, throbbing, heading for the bath. Every night when he lay in bed curled up into himself. It was just kissing.

It was just kissing, he told himself when Draco's tongue slipped past Ron's lips and made Ron's mouth water. Just a bit of fun, when Ron slid his fingers over Draco's arms, chest, waist, searching for a patch of skin to touch. Just fooling about, when Draco left a livid mark on Ron's neck that Ron couldn't charm away.

It was nothing.

They didn't talk and they didn't write and they didn't look at each other in the Great Hall.

They just kissed. Draco's knee was between Ron's legs and his hand was on Ron's neck, twisting in Ron's hair. Ron stroked Draco's back, both hands up and down, over bare skin.

Draco tasted like spearmint and Ron didn't like it. Draco's mouth was cold and tingly and different. Why had Draco done that? Ron opened his eyes. Draco's eyes were closed and he sighed when Ron pulled him closer.

It was nothing.

Comments

[wickedcherub.livejournal.com]

I love that last paragraph and the last line :)

Is it supposed to be formatted like that? It throws me.

[prillalar]

Thanks! And you mean the line-length? Yeah, that's deliberate. I think it's easier to read shorter lines. Or does it wrap weirdly for you? Maybe I'll switch it back.

[ellensmithee.livejournal.com]

Oh! I'm in love with this drabble. :-)

[prillalar]

It loves you back and so do I. :)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

I just read this three, maybe four times in a row. It's compelling, especially the shift when Draco uses mouthwash and Ron still clings to his hope that it's nothing. When it's clearly something. Wonderful.

Icarus

[prillalar]

I'm so pleased to hear that. :) Thank you.

[lrodell.livejournal.com]

=)
yesss, kissing is good^^

[prillalar]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[bowdlerized.livejournal.com]

Mmm yum. This does a lot in so few words.

[prillalar]

Thank you! I like doing short bits about these two.

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

This is just stunning. The last bit just about killed me. Perfect.

[prillalar]

Aw, thanks!

[jeddy83.livejournal.com]

Ah well, if it's more boy kissage like this, I say bring it on. :D

[prillalar]

It will be many sorts and flavours of boy kissage! I'm glad you liked this one. :)

[neeteeus.livejournal.com]

Yum!

I love the mouthwash bit. It really strikes home with me.

Loved it! I'll be back tomorrow to see the next kiss!

[prillalar]

Thank you! I will be roaming over many fandoms with the kissage, but I think I'll get back to HP again before I'm done.

[cageyklio.livejournal.com]

I ::heart:: the Week of Boy Kissage. I hope there's Doggett kissage. And Luke Skywalker. And and and and...

[prillalar]

Hee! Thanks. :) I'm not quite sure what to do about TXF since it has to be boys and not men. But Luke I hope to get to.

[phineasjones.livejournal.com]

mmm. wow. gorgeous.

Why had Draco done that?

ah. gets me right here, ya know?

[prillalar]

Thanks so much! Poor Ron and his cluelessness about matters of the heart. *g*

[shrift.livejournal.com]

They met and one of them would lean against the other and push him back and they would suck each other's mouths in hot, slippery kisses that went on for five minutes at a time.

Mmm. Angry-hot-slippery-in-denial-boykissage. Yummy. I now totally see the way and the light of Ron/Draco.

[prillalar]

Glad to hear it. :) Messy boykissing is such fun, esp with these two clueless wonders.

[laurakaye.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmmm, boykissage.

Mmmmmmmmm, Draco/Ron.

*hearts*

[prillalar]

Yay! Thank you. :)

[leodormiens.livejournal.com]

You know what, yours are the only drabbles I ever read. And this one is an example of just why.
*sigh*

[prillalar]

*beam* Thanks so much!

[muguet-au-bois.livejournal.com]

PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

[prillalar]

*pets you*

[shatterglass.livejournal.com]

BOYKISSAGE. -friends-

[prillalar]

Boykissage -- it's what's for dinner. *g*

[willysunny.livejournal.com]

That last line... *sighs with Draco* So well written. Lunch and boy kissing - I am so happy. Thank you!

[prillalar]

Thank you! I'm glad it perked up your day. :)

[semielliptical]

Poor Ron, he was working pretty hard to say in denial. A painful fic, but it seems right for Ron and Draco.

[prillalar]

I know, poor boys, both of them. But they were born to be unhappy together. Or so I believe. :)

[moshi.livejournal.com]

Ah, that was fab. And what a great pairing to play around with. The angst! I like it a lot. :D

[prillalar]

Thank you! I enjoy writing these two -- they always deliver.

[nataliadarimini.livejournal.com]

I just love this.
I adore the way that Ron didn't want to see Draco's open eyes, but when he finally opened his own eyes they were closed. *happy sigh*

[prillalar]

I'm glad you liked it. :) Ron works so hard at his denial, poor boy.

[cloisonne.livejournal.com]

i think every week should be the week of boykissage. it's a very lovely thing. as was this fic. i loved it muchly.

::loves::

[prillalar]

Aw, thank you. :)

[miss-f.livejournal.com]

...must not sound like a totally retarded fangrrrl...gah...can't help it...

Aaaaaaaw this was soooo sweet.

If it were not for the warm fuzzy glow that surrounds me now I could probably come up with a better comment. Anyway, your drabbles rock!

[prillalar]

Hee! I'm glad to hear of the warm fuzzy glow. :)

[harveywallbang.livejournal.com]

that's so precious..
reminds me of those mindless countless times i made out with my boyfriend..cept it didn't mean nothing... we were just young and looooooovvvvvvveedd kissing..
kissing is wonderful.... *sigh*

[prillalar]

Glad you enjoyed. :) I think there aren't enough stories just about kissing. *g*

[tehlils.livejournal.com]

Mmm, lovely kissing. And I love Ron in denial. He's so good at it. :D

[prillalar]

Thank you!

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[http://users.livejournal.com/supes_/]

*sigh* so very pretty... and sad, too. i loved it.

this bit, especially:
"It was just kissing, he told himself when Draco's tongue slipped past Ron's lips and made Ron's mouth water. Just a bit of fun, when Ron slid his fingers over Draco's arms, chest, waist, searching for a patch of skin to touch. Just fooling about, when Draco left a livid mark on Ron's neck that Ron couldn't charm away."

it really goes deep, to the gut. you know?

feels very characteristic to the pairing, too. i really admire how you can write them -- or at least ron, since this is mostly a ron story -- so well in so few words.

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[prillalar]

Thank you! R/D is a favourite pair of mine. I've often thought that they would have been perfect rivals if Harry hadn't shown up to get between them.