Oh wow, this is so amazing. I love all the repeating motifs like ducks and squawks and eyebrows, and I love Momo's voice in this, and how unexpectedly well he and Atobe get along. The movie scene is really touching and I felt so much for poor Momo afterwards, when he was feeling achy all over and thought he had only one date to look forward to. I'm so happy he didn't have to let Atobe go!

The last sentence is a hoot! As is this whole fic. :) I laughed out loud many times -- Momo's utter incomprehension for the advice to "Be yourself" and eyebrows on strings and all that. And Atobe telling a duck joke was a lovely moment!