This is really great feedback -- thank you so much! It's so great to hear the story affected you like that. I really wanted to portray the confusion that so easily creeps into relationships, especially at that age. And the inability to figure out what to do about.

I felt so badly for them while I was writing this. I'm glad it could turn out all right for them in the end.

(And MomoKai is soooo fun -- it's totally possible to ship both IK and MK.)