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I send you this file in order to have your advice.
This meme is going to have the same effect as mentioning JKR's adverbs before you read HP. *g*
How to tell if you are reading Hal-brand fanfic, at least the stuff from the last few years:
10. plain language
9. few supporting characters
8. excessive use of the word "and"
7. an overabundance of tricolons
6. Kaidoh starts off miserable and ends up happy
5. if there's explicit sex, it's depressing or awkward
4. somebody gets pushed up against a wall
3. Tezuka starts off miserable and ends up miserable
2. comma splices, beautiful comma splices
1. It says "by Halrloprillalar" on it
How to tell if you are reading Hal-brand fanfic, at least the stuff from the last few years:
10. plain language
9. few supporting characters
8. excessive use of the word "and"
7. an overabundance of tricolons
6. Kaidoh starts off miserable and ends up happy
5. if there's explicit sex, it's depressing or awkward
4. somebody gets pushed up against a wall
3. Tezuka starts off miserable and ends up miserable
2. comma splices, beautiful comma splices
1. It says "by Halrloprillalar" on it