I'd never considered this pairing before which, considering the subtext for almost every single peiring in this anime, says quite a lot, heh. But... I really liked it.
I think you got their personalities just right, and this despite the fact that I have trouble ever seeing a personality in Tezuka... No, seriously, it was great.
My fabourite part:
Last night, Tezuka had spent two hours at his desk, trying to decide the match order against Rikkai. He had just crumpled up his sixth attempt when his phone rang.
"There is a 93% chance you are having trouble with the match order."
It just says so much more than the obvious, IMO. And it's funny.^^
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I think you got their personalities just right, and this despite the fact that I have trouble ever seeing a personality in Tezuka... No, seriously, it was great.
My fabourite part:
Last night, Tezuka had spent two hours at his desk, trying to decide the match order against Rikkai. He had just crumpled up his sixth attempt when his phone rang.
"There is a 93% chance you are having trouble with the match order."
It just says so much more than the obvious, IMO. And it's funny.^^