ext_137444 ([identity profile] fic-faery.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] prillalar 2005-10-24 09:53 am (UTC)

Nicely written, the quiet private euphoria Tezuka feels about winning Nationals and how his team celebrates. Momo getting Tezuka drunk is priceless and poor Tezuka had probably never been so graceless in his life.

The hall scene with Inui and Tezuka was filled with such tension it was great. And Oishi saying he'll take him home and Inui dealing with Momo in the simple short sentences they shared there was such understanding and friendship between the team members.

I'm such a big closet InuiTezuka fan, >.> just don't tell the AtoTez fangirl inside me.

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