I'm so pleased to hear this worked for you! It's my first stab at Atobe, so I'm glad he came off well.

I'm like that about some characters or pairings -- my own interpretation of them is so specific, I find it hard to read other people's fic about them, even if it's well done. Fortunately, there are other pairings I'm not like that about or I'd never have anything to read!

And that line kind of gave me the shivers too. :)